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dreams

butterflies sitting on eyelids
dreams waked up
lips smiled
dimpy
Written by dimpy (dimpsmoon)
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Re. dreams
25th Mar 2023 11:36am
Lovely read to start my day...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. dreams
(dimpsmoon)
25th Mar 2023 11:37am
Thank You 😊
dimpy
Re. dreams
(The Fire Elemental)
25th Mar 2023 3:23pm
Your poem has a rather transformative metaphor that is mellifluous.
DanielChristensen
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Re: Re. dreams
(dimpsmoon)
26th Mar 2023 8:38am
Many thanks Daniel .
dimpy
Re: Re. dreams
(The Fire Elemental)
26th Mar 2023 2:22pm
You're welcome. I wrote something about dreams last night I'll post some time today.
DanielChristensen
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Re: Re. dreams
(dimpsmoon)
26th Mar 2023 2:24pm
Awwww really
Curious to read that. Hope you will post soon.
dimpy
Re. dreams
(Mister Write)
25th Mar 2023 3:39pm
This is a gorgeous haiku. 😊 Thanks for sharing.
Poetic_Quill
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Re: Re. dreams
(dimpsmoon)
26th Mar 2023 8:38am
I'm glad that you liked
dimpy

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