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the truth doesn't hurt, but lies certainly do
as lies fell
from your lips
like drops of
lead arsenic
the serpent crawled
around my legs,
rose and stole the
words from my
mouth
paradise will
never be the
same
Published 21st Mar 2023
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2023 00:40am
Very true. When it goes, it's gone forever. 😥
22nd Mar 2023 1:04am
29th Mar 2023 5:37pm
Liked the raw imagery and emotion on this, scary and beautiful at the same time.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
30th Mar 2023 3:03am
29th Mar 2023 6:10pm
It hurts to find out the person you had feelings for let you down in a terrible way Tell the truth or don't come near me is my feelings on such circumstances.
30th Mar 2023 3:05am
