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Coma (re-written)
Hey, i'm slipping away in this coma
and strangely it's great
i don't think i'd ever want to
come back to this world again
it free's my pain
i think i like it in a coma
what's the point in living a life?
when no one wants to bring you back to this world
again
the feeling like i'm floating away
is no more pressure
i like it this way
no more worthless pain
my head won't wake
but my body still calls me
to come back to this world
again
a coma is like sailing with the sea
suspended in your destiny
i could leave so easily
i'vr got the bones on the mast
so i don't think there's light for me
friend's and family call back to me
but on the end they'll leave it all up to me
all i really need is some sympathy
and somone to tell me where my head rests
coma's getting deeper
slipping farther away
i need a miricle
to make me stay
in this world filled with lies
in this world filled with hate
why won't you help me?
save me
cruel world
why won't you understand me?
i'm so full of wreckage
full of twisted dreams
i don't need a doctor to tell me what this means
blocking away all my screams
so the crossroads can find me clearly
no one will bother me anymore
no doctor can mess with my head no more
i'm no longer lonely
i'll bring to the shore
nothing
because there's nothing to see
just peace and that's fine with me
cruel world please don't take me back
i don't want to live again
what's the point in fighting?
when we all die anyway
live all your life like it's a coma
with all those reasons in living
it's hard to believe , when no one's prepared for the giving
i've got my ticket
to my last chance ride
this is my trip to my suicide
no return journey, i don't want to be alive
all technonlogy and communication
will still leave you in the cold
no more living hope
when you feel so weak and old
there is always history to be made
so a story must be told
you don't need a doctor
when no one else can heal your soul
iv'e got my life on the line
need no one to pull the trigger
just step aside
everybody wave goodbye
because you won't have a chance in the morning
you can't call me on the phone
you can leave me a message
but no one will be at home
and when your still mourning
it's no one's fault but your own
i always gave you warnings
i always gace you signs
you never noticed
because i gave you too much time
no one was really listening
my best friend didn't even drop a dime
so now i'm tied of waiting
for a way to spend my time
it's so easy to be social
it's so easy to be cool
it's so easy to be lonely
when no body loves you
you can wait for the returns of my life
and reach the point of breaking
no time to heal broken memories
when every other man needs to survive.
and strangely it's great
i don't think i'd ever want to
come back to this world again
it free's my pain
i think i like it in a coma
what's the point in living a life?
when no one wants to bring you back to this world
again
the feeling like i'm floating away
is no more pressure
i like it this way
no more worthless pain
my head won't wake
but my body still calls me
to come back to this world
again
a coma is like sailing with the sea
suspended in your destiny
i could leave so easily
i'vr got the bones on the mast
so i don't think there's light for me
friend's and family call back to me
but on the end they'll leave it all up to me
all i really need is some sympathy
and somone to tell me where my head rests
coma's getting deeper
slipping farther away
i need a miricle
to make me stay
in this world filled with lies
in this world filled with hate
why won't you help me?
save me
cruel world
why won't you understand me?
i'm so full of wreckage
full of twisted dreams
i don't need a doctor to tell me what this means
blocking away all my screams
so the crossroads can find me clearly
no one will bother me anymore
no doctor can mess with my head no more
i'm no longer lonely
i'll bring to the shore
nothing
because there's nothing to see
just peace and that's fine with me
cruel world please don't take me back
i don't want to live again
what's the point in fighting?
when we all die anyway
live all your life like it's a coma
with all those reasons in living
it's hard to believe , when no one's prepared for the giving
i've got my ticket
to my last chance ride
this is my trip to my suicide
no return journey, i don't want to be alive
all technonlogy and communication
will still leave you in the cold
no more living hope
when you feel so weak and old
there is always history to be made
so a story must be told
you don't need a doctor
when no one else can heal your soul
iv'e got my life on the line
need no one to pull the trigger
just step aside
everybody wave goodbye
because you won't have a chance in the morning
you can't call me on the phone
you can leave me a message
but no one will be at home
and when your still mourning
it's no one's fault but your own
i always gave you warnings
i always gace you signs
you never noticed
because i gave you too much time
no one was really listening
my best friend didn't even drop a dime
so now i'm tied of waiting
for a way to spend my time
it's so easy to be social
it's so easy to be cool
it's so easy to be lonely
when no body loves you
you can wait for the returns of my life
and reach the point of breaking
no time to heal broken memories
when every other man needs to survive.
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