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A Loving Universe
In the half-light of evening I gazed across the solid landscape of his chest. My eyes came to rest on the object of my desire, erect as if with newfound purpose.
We were naked and unashamed.
My legs, once trained as a dancer, moved smoothly over him. I heard his whimper the moment he slid into the syrupy depths that hid the mysteries of my life.
We paused for a moment to feel the heat of this first joining, then we fell easily into rhythms as if directed by others. Could two mammals, tiny specks of life, make love under starry skies without altering some piece of reality?
Do our bodies channel past generations of learned behavior?
Are we merely playing our assigned parts in the evolution of our species?
Maybe we're following the simple inclinations of a loving Universe?
We were naked and unashamed.
My legs, once trained as a dancer, moved smoothly over him. I heard his whimper the moment he slid into the syrupy depths that hid the mysteries of my life.
We paused for a moment to feel the heat of this first joining, then we fell easily into rhythms as if directed by others. Could two mammals, tiny specks of life, make love under starry skies without altering some piece of reality?
Do our bodies channel past generations of learned behavior?
Are we merely playing our assigned parts in the evolution of our species?
Maybe we're following the simple inclinations of a loving Universe?
Published Yesterday
Author's Note
I'm thankful for the loving inclinations of our Universe. I wrote this from a journal entry after making love under starry skies recently.
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Yesterday 12:47pm
Dearest Nizana,
How beautifully and passionately you express the act of love, so primal and yet so profound! As a creature of the night who has lived for centuries, I have seen many such moments between humans and have come to appreciate the intricacies of your emotions and biology.
You speak of your bodies moving together effortlessly, as if directed by some force beyond your understanding. And indeed, there is a mysterious energy that permeates the universe, guiding all living beings on their journeys. We vampires call it the Life Force, and we regard it with reverence and awe.
Some may ask if our actions are merely predetermined by genetics or societal norms, but I believe that we are more than our biology or environment. We are beings with free will, capable of choosing our own paths and shaping our own destinies. And yet, we are also influenced by the cosmos, by the ebb and flow of energy that surrounds us all.
Love, in particular, is a powerful force that transcends time and space. It is a primal urge that drives us to seek out connection and intimacy, to find meaning in a world that can often seem chaotic and harsh. It is the very essence of what makes us human (or in my case, vampiric).
So I say to you, Nizana, embrace that loving Universe with all your heart and soul. Let it guide you on your journey, and draw strength from the knowledge that you are part of something greater than yourself.
With eternal devotion,
Mr Black
How beautifully and passionately you express the act of love, so primal and yet so profound! As a creature of the night who has lived for centuries, I have seen many such moments between humans and have come to appreciate the intricacies of your emotions and biology.
You speak of your bodies moving together effortlessly, as if directed by some force beyond your understanding. And indeed, there is a mysterious energy that permeates the universe, guiding all living beings on their journeys. We vampires call it the Life Force, and we regard it with reverence and awe.
Some may ask if our actions are merely predetermined by genetics or societal norms, but I believe that we are more than our biology or environment. We are beings with free will, capable of choosing our own paths and shaping our own destinies. And yet, we are also influenced by the cosmos, by the ebb and flow of energy that surrounds us all.
Love, in particular, is a powerful force that transcends time and space. It is a primal urge that drives us to seek out connection and intimacy, to find meaning in a world that can often seem chaotic and harsh. It is the very essence of what makes us human (or in my case, vampiric).
So I say to you, Nizana, embrace that loving Universe with all your heart and soul. Let it guide you on your journey, and draw strength from the knowledge that you are part of something greater than yourself.
With eternal devotion,
Mr Black
Yesterday 2:36pm
Exquisitely, sensuous and beautiful...with a splash of erotica. VERY MUCH enjoyed. I hope and pray you are feeling stronger everyday in your journey. Be Blessed and know that EVERY step matters..no matter its size or direction. 🥰💯❤
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Yesterday 7:46pm
I echo Monovox's comments. A session as naturalistic as making love under the stars has inspired a profound and beautiful write.
