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Wow....(and I Wonder)

......what is the blunder that I have committed?  What was the crime?

What was a simple intention, not to mention that I think the poet is sublime.  She blocks my intention and now my rhyme is out of time.

That really kind of hurts.  It really kind of stings.  You have a right to do what you will.  In retrospect, I ask only one thing.

Can you please find it in your heart to tell me what I did wrong?  I meant no disrespect to you.  Please don't let this be some sort of "Swan Song"  and our acquaintance long gone

Having no idea for what has gone wrong
Written by MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
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