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fuck me like we fell in l*ve
Baby, just tonight,
let’s get drunk
on the taste
of fingerprints
on naked
skin
Just tonight,
scoop me up
in your strong
arms and cross the
threshold with
my heart,
even if it’s all ashes
in the day;
and just tonight,
fuck me
like we fell in l*ve
Wind your fingers through mine,
and keep me here
all night,
wet skin, damp hair, pure need,
until your shoulders shake
until your name is a whispered prayer
until my toes curl into the bed
and I half sob
now,
please.
then, baby, take those last
ten strokes like
a man unhinged,
while my hips
buck hard enough
to bruise us both
and when you drop your
weight on me,
heart racing,
breath ragged,
cock twitching
I’m going to hold you
closer than my
own skin,
like I’m a just
a little in l*ve
Baby, I’m drunk
on the taste
of my fingerprints
on your naked skin
Fuck me
(just a little)
like we fell in
l*ve
(just tonight)
let’s get drunk
on the taste
of fingerprints
on naked
skin
Just tonight,
scoop me up
in your strong
arms and cross the
threshold with
my heart,
even if it’s all ashes
in the day;
and just tonight,
fuck me
like we fell in l*ve
Wind your fingers through mine,
and keep me here
all night,
wet skin, damp hair, pure need,
until your shoulders shake
until your name is a whispered prayer
until my toes curl into the bed
and I half sob
now,
please.
then, baby, take those last
ten strokes like
a man unhinged,
while my hips
buck hard enough
to bruise us both
and when you drop your
weight on me,
heart racing,
breath ragged,
cock twitching
I’m going to hold you
closer than my
own skin,
like I’m a just
a little in l*ve
Baby, I’m drunk
on the taste
of my fingerprints
on your naked skin
Fuck me
(just a little)
like we fell in
l*ve
(just tonight)
Written by
Betty
Published 19th Mar 2023
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Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
19th Mar 2023 3:28am
Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
19th Mar 2023 1:23pm
We are gonna have a whole praise choir going on in here.
Hm.
Those are words I never thought would belong on a piece like this.
Hm.
🙂 thanks hon
Hm.
Those are words I never thought would belong on a piece like this.
Hm.
🙂 thanks hon
Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
Anonymous
19th Mar 2023 7:07am
Ah yes, a case of conflicted thoughts. The need to hold them closer to you than your own skin, yet unable to give voice to the word love in it's natural form.
Is it commitment issues? Or is it simply internal conflict between the primal indulgences of the the body and the sensible decision making of the mind?
I like that you left it open and unanswered.
Great piece, B!
Is it commitment issues? Or is it simply internal conflict between the primal indulgences of the the body and the sensible decision making of the mind?
I like that you left it open and unanswered.
Great piece, B!
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Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
Ah. You made the connection between the conflicting shit.
Thank you for the rhetoric in your review. I’m sure there’s an answer to questions like those somewhere.
Actually… thank you for the review. It kicked ass. Here, hold this tambourine, we’re about to start a praise choir in here, and we need someone with a cute ass to play it.
Thank you for the rhetoric in your review. I’m sure there’s an answer to questions like those somewhere.
Actually… thank you for the review. It kicked ass. Here, hold this tambourine, we’re about to start a praise choir in here, and we need someone with a cute ass to play it.
Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
Anonymous
19th Mar 2023 4:11pm
😶
❤️
❤️
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Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
19th Mar 2023 6:00pm
(unties bib)
Damn. You've learned to not use your words around me.
(hides bib)
I wasn't going to try to devour you or anything, delicious, I mean Lady... damn.
But hey... thanks.
Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
Anonymous
19th Mar 2023 6:03pm
But hey. THANKS. Christ woman
THIS?!,!!,!,
then, baby, take those last
ten strokes like
a man unhinged,
while my hips
buck hard enough
to bruise us both
FUCK
LOL
THIS?!,!!,!,
then, baby, take those last
ten strokes like
a man unhinged,
while my hips
buck hard enough
to bruise us both
FUCK
LOL
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Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
19th Mar 2023 6:05pm
YAAAAASSS GIRL!
Fuck!
It's what makes the world go 'round.
So hey, while you're here, want to sit on my ... new dinette chairs?!
(What?! You perv!)
Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
Anonymous
19th Mar 2023 6:07pm
I need to sir down. Yes
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Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
Anonymous
19th Mar 2023 6:09pm
😶
Can't even type straight
Shhhhhhh woman LOL
Can't even type straight
Shhhhhhh woman LOL
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Re: Re. like we fell in l*ve, just a little
19th Mar 2023 7:17pm
(ties bib back around neck)
Oh? Need somewhere to sit?
Pull off your pants. I have just the place.
On my new sofa, because it's so soft it's like a robe!
(Sicko. What were you thinking?!)
Oh? Need somewhere to sit?
Pull off your pants. I have just the place.
On my new sofa, because it's so soft it's like a robe!
(Sicko. What were you thinking?!)
Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
20th Mar 2023 4:20pm
Smoke my sex deep like a Black & Mild
Up and down, slimy slick-ride me for awhile,
So I can produce on both those lips an erotic smile
Satisfaction guaranteed with no denial.
Up and down, slimy slick-ride me for awhile,
So I can produce on both those lips an erotic smile
Satisfaction guaranteed with no denial.
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Re: Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
20th Mar 2023 4:30pm
Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
20th Mar 2023 7:38pm
I finished reading this and started listening to the cover of "I Wanna Be Adored" by King Woman.
I know this poem very well. And this poem knows me well enough. I think you know that.
The light at the end is just a story. So that we can fall in l**e.
I know this poem very well. And this poem knows me well enough. I think you know that.
The light at the end is just a story. So that we can fall in l**e.
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Re: Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
20th Mar 2023 8:20pm
I do know that. It’s so fucking good to see you after all this time. I am always flattered to have you check my shit out.
Stay kind, nerd
Re: Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
21st Mar 2023 7:24am
The pleasure is all mine. MINE. Despite my kindness, that's something I won't part ways with. :)
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Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
23rd Mar 2023 4:11pm
There is s*mething in allowing ourselves as humans to forget our humanity a little.
And something in our animal....to forget it a whole lot.
And something in our animal....to forget it a whole lot.
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Re: Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
23rd Mar 2023 4:16pm
Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
29th Mar 2023 4:17pm
A very insistent "come inside" piece, might be rhymingly put
"No dally-dilly
upon your willy!
It's time for action
on the attraction!"
Raw and animalistic piece.
"No dally-dilly
upon your willy!
It's time for action
on the attraction!"
Raw and animalistic piece.
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Re: Re. fuck me like we fell in l*ve
29th Mar 2023 4:38pm
Thank you, SS, I appreciate your enthusiasm! You really seem appreciative of the ocean of jizz around here and I appreciate that.