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Attraction
her eyes speak to me
without ever making a sound
secrets wanton
whispered from within
an emerald eruption
born from a beauty,
a brilliance
that's abound
she holds my attention
much more than she might know
a wave of magnetic attraction
I blush as she gracefully moves
her mind pulls me in closer
to revel in a magnificent view
without ever making a sound
secrets wanton
whispered from within
an emerald eruption
born from a beauty,
a brilliance
that's abound
she holds my attention
much more than she might know
a wave of magnetic attraction
I blush as she gracefully moves
her mind pulls me in closer
to revel in a magnificent view
Published 17th Mar 2023
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17th Mar 2023 9:53pm
17th Mar 2023 10:37pm
17th Mar 2023 11:48pm
This suble type of attraction, from a man is worthy of admiration. Simply because its not lust-based lol 😂 well done!
18th Mar 2023 3:19am
Dear JT,
This was such a lovely read. I enjoyed the beauty of description for the heroine and how smitten the hero was. Kind and sweet. Lovely write. H🌷
This was such a lovely read. I enjoyed the beauty of description for the heroine and how smitten the hero was. Kind and sweet. Lovely write. H🌷
18th Mar 2023 8:39am
she must be a stunner the way you describe the attraction.
i can only imagine...
great ink
i can only imagine...
great ink
18th Mar 2023 7:04pm
Well look at you being all romantic:)
Great piece Tim.
My fave is the ending.
I enjoy endings that close a piece perfectly.
Wonderful:)
Great piece Tim.
My fave is the ending.
I enjoy endings that close a piece perfectly.
Wonderful:)
