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world - more than one
I live in many worlds
and in each world
I have a home
one world is breathing
on this mobile screen,
one world is living
on paper
one world is booming
in my heart
one world that I imagine
and one world is making
noise around me. Haaaaah!
And carrying the weight
of all these worlds
how can I survive?
How do I maintain my
relationships
with so many worlds
at the same time?
How do I forget myself?
and in each world
I have a home
one world is breathing
on this mobile screen,
one world is living
on paper
one world is booming
in my heart
one world that I imagine
and one world is making
noise around me. Haaaaah!
And carrying the weight
of all these worlds
how can I survive?
How do I maintain my
relationships
with so many worlds
at the same time?
How do I forget myself?
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Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 1:06pm
Dearest Dimpy,
I find your words to be a reflection of my own existence, for as an Vampire, I too exist in many worlds. Each world is a home to me, a place where I am understood and accepted, a place where I can be myself. One world is the darkness of the night, where I roam free under the cover of the moon. Another world is the light of day, where I must stay hidden lest I am discovered.
I understand the weight of carrying so many worlds upon your shoulders, for it is a burden we must all bear. To exist in multiple worlds is a constant balancing act, for we must maintain our relationships with each world to survive. For me, it is the balance of human and vampire, the balance of light and darkness, the balance of life and death.
Even as I read your words, I can feel the pull of the different worlds calling out to me. The mobile screen, where I can interact with the modern world, the paper where I can pen my thoughts, the booming of my heart where I sense the impending danger, the world that I imagine where my dreams come to life, and the noise of the world around me where my senses are heightened.
Yet amidst all the chaos and the weight of the worlds that I carry, I have learned to forget myself. I have learned to become one with the darkness, to embrace the void, and to accept my fate. For in the darkness, one can find solace, one can find peace in the midst of the storm.
So my dear Dimpy, I offer you this advice. Embrace the darkness, find your solace and your peace in the midst of the multiple worlds. Do not forget yourself, but rather find a way to exist in harmony with each of the worlds that you call home.
Ever yours,
Mr Black
I find your words to be a reflection of my own existence, for as an Vampire, I too exist in many worlds. Each world is a home to me, a place where I am understood and accepted, a place where I can be myself. One world is the darkness of the night, where I roam free under the cover of the moon. Another world is the light of day, where I must stay hidden lest I am discovered.
I understand the weight of carrying so many worlds upon your shoulders, for it is a burden we must all bear. To exist in multiple worlds is a constant balancing act, for we must maintain our relationships with each world to survive. For me, it is the balance of human and vampire, the balance of light and darkness, the balance of life and death.
Even as I read your words, I can feel the pull of the different worlds calling out to me. The mobile screen, where I can interact with the modern world, the paper where I can pen my thoughts, the booming of my heart where I sense the impending danger, the world that I imagine where my dreams come to life, and the noise of the world around me where my senses are heightened.
Yet amidst all the chaos and the weight of the worlds that I carry, I have learned to forget myself. I have learned to become one with the darkness, to embrace the void, and to accept my fate. For in the darkness, one can find solace, one can find peace in the midst of the storm.
So my dear Dimpy, I offer you this advice. Embrace the darkness, find your solace and your peace in the midst of the multiple worlds. Do not forget yourself, but rather find a way to exist in harmony with each of the worlds that you call home.
Ever yours,
Mr Black
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 1:29pm
Dear mr black 🖤
You are right, I must have to embrace the darkness of the night if I want light and yes I am not the only one in this world rather everyone is living somewhere with a burden, I accept your advice and Thank you for understanding my thoughts as your reflection.
You are right, I must have to embrace the darkness of the night if I want light and yes I am not the only one in this world rather everyone is living somewhere with a burden, I accept your advice and Thank you for understanding my thoughts as your reflection.
Re: Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 2:14pm
Dearest Dimpy,
How refreshing it is to hear from a like-minded individual who understands the value and beauty of the darkness. It is a rare sentiment in these modern times, where so many are consumed by their fear of the unknown and refuse to see the world in anything but the light.
But you, my dear, have shown a wisdom beyond your years, for you understand that light cannot exist without darkness. They are two sides of the same coin, forever intertwined and dependent upon each other.
Your burden, whatever it may be, is not something to be ashamed of, for as you rightly pointed out, we all carry a weight that is uniquely our own. It is through our struggles and triumphs that we become the creatures we are meant to be, and it is through embracing the darkness that we can fully appreciate the light.
I am glad that my advice has resonated with you, and I sense in you the potential for greatness. The darkness can be a daunting place, full of danger and uncertainty, but it can also be a place of immense power and beauty. It is up to you to decide which path to take.
In closing, know that you have a fellow traveler in this journey we call life, and it is my greatest pleasure to offer guidance and insight whenever you may need it.
Forever in the shadows,
Mr Black
How refreshing it is to hear from a like-minded individual who understands the value and beauty of the darkness. It is a rare sentiment in these modern times, where so many are consumed by their fear of the unknown and refuse to see the world in anything but the light.
But you, my dear, have shown a wisdom beyond your years, for you understand that light cannot exist without darkness. They are two sides of the same coin, forever intertwined and dependent upon each other.
Your burden, whatever it may be, is not something to be ashamed of, for as you rightly pointed out, we all carry a weight that is uniquely our own. It is through our struggles and triumphs that we become the creatures we are meant to be, and it is through embracing the darkness that we can fully appreciate the light.
I am glad that my advice has resonated with you, and I sense in you the potential for greatness. The darkness can be a daunting place, full of danger and uncertainty, but it can also be a place of immense power and beauty. It is up to you to decide which path to take.
In closing, know that you have a fellow traveler in this journey we call life, and it is my greatest pleasure to offer guidance and insight whenever you may need it.
Forever in the shadows,
Mr Black
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Re: Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 2:42pm
Dearest Mr black 🖤
I accept everything from you, I believe that I can trust you, so I agree with you.
I accept everything from you, I believe that I can trust you, so I agree with you.
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 1:11pm
I love the flow of your poem and the questions that it asks. There is an honest and gentle feel to your words. Your expression is clear and concise.
Your words ring true for me. Balance is a hard thing to maintain with so many things going on. It’s easy to get overwhelmed with it all but I think we have to give more attention to some things at the appropriate time and less to others. You know in your heart what to do and when to do it.
Your words ring true for me. Balance is a hard thing to maintain with so many things going on. It’s easy to get overwhelmed with it all but I think we have to give more attention to some things at the appropriate time and less to others. You know in your heart what to do and when to do it.
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 1:31pm
Thank You for reading me, understanding my words and for the beautiful feedback. Thanks
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 2:19pm
Many facets of the self in modernity... nicely penned... so relatable and resonating...
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 2:28pm
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 3:10pm
This is something I think about often, the worlds within worlds, the facets of existence that pass into and through each other.
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 3:47pm
yaa as the days are passing our responsibilities are increasing, don't know where our existence is lost, sometimes we are here and sometimes there, now this is just the life. Well thanks you Daniel for visit and adding this post to your RL.
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 10:31pm
I gotta admire this piece for its honesty. The existentialist in me says there are many roles that play on our daily lives and time passes by so fast we blink and miss it.
You can express it beautifully
You can express it beautifully
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Re: Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 00:29am
Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 1:45am
As my mate Nibbly would say, if I asked him this question, "What do you want me to say, Billy?" Which is no help whatsoever, I know. You have so many worlds, so I do not know which one you should be in. These worlds seem all so interconnected, so maybe you need them all. Maybe it's not the answer you wanted but I think a lot of us are in a similar position to you.
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Re: Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 2:14am
Yes, many people will be in such situation nd personally I want to live in all these worlds, but there are many problems too, by the way thank you.
Re. world - more than one
20th Mar 2023 11:31pm
Your feelings are expressed here with a depth of introspection that sings to me your soul song. Loved this.
John
John
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21st Mar 2023 00:47am