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Tiny truths... in glimpses
I want to shrink down
slither deep inside
warm myself
until I'm dripping
of your sweet mastery
Smile through welcomed howls
try to still
as the sear burns
into each cell
Fusing
two
to one
Divinity and destiny
beautifully procreate—
birth a new life
In understanding the needs of the flesh;
The ying and yang
of our power exchange
How desire's rippled current electrifies!
My knees wobble
I'm a new babe
that warm debauched thoughts
cascade
Found existence created specifically
to flare my senses
into pure chaos,
pillages... everywhere
My lips moisten
along with all the other places
I love to have wet
Seeking out cavernous depths
mental calibrations
interpret
explore
become
Taboo is a misnomer
Fledgling chemistry throbs
second to second
torment
My soul's truest beckoning—
needing you
to have your way with me
Calls forth out of every pore
from the surrealistic cellular level
to the hardcore fashioning
that you bury
so very deep...inside
The direness of that ache
is overwhelming.
Pain— pleasure
dynamically dueling
uncovering - discovering
Letting go even tiniest concerns
where self consciousness dictates
embarrassments
I find myself,
allowing each enjoyment heard—
affirmations
in begs
and
pleas
Recognizing the amount of tangible lust
I exude, demand and require
speaking with my body
what I cannot always rightly convey
even with the cleverest of words
Deliriously shrunken down
feeling every single part of you
infiltrate me
marking delicious ownership
again and again
I become pure devotion
and
fully aware
the deep
meaning
that is
Yours.
Published 15th Mar 2023
| Edited 16th Mar 2023
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15th Mar 2023 8:32pm
15th Mar 2023 10:13pm
Tiny truths...huge revelations. Either way, the destination of pleasure knows no boundaries.
hugs,
buddhakitty
hugs,
buddhakitty
15th Mar 2023 10:51pm
Boundless possibilities, indeed!
Thanks for reading, bk... I appreciate it, muchly.
💙💙
-B
Thanks for reading, bk... I appreciate it, muchly.
💙💙
-B
My mind is on fire. You need to need to be given orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
16th Mar 2023 2:31pm
Ohhh, Francisco... You're an amazing person who just can't enough of anything orgasmic... and who can blame you, right?!... We all should be so open and honest... hahaha...
Thank you for your comments, I bask in the strength you mentioned!
🌹B
Thank you for your comments, I bask in the strength you mentioned!
🌹B
16th Mar 2023 7:28pm
16th Mar 2023 7:50pm
16th Mar 2023 00:22am
hello beautiful Blue this is so very powerful and genuine so much so that it hurts 💕true art...
There's always pain wherever there is growth and potential for beauty, methinks. I adore your thoughts, Brenda! They bring such warmth and understanding, especially when I've accessed from deep within, to get a little something inked onto the page.
It does my heart wonders to see you 🦋
Thank you so for the visit and you sharing you.
🌹 💙
It does my heart wonders to see you 🦋
Thank you so for the visit and you sharing you.
🌹 💙
16th Mar 2023 1:20am
Dang! What have you been doing with your time away?!
Your consonants are hard. Your vowels are soft. They meld together so well...
Luscious and thought provoking. As if it could ever be less!
Your consonants are hard. Your vowels are soft. They meld together so well...
Luscious and thought provoking. As if it could ever be less!
I have been lucky to be in good hands, that's for sure!
Thanks for the visit.... The idea that 'luscious' sprang to mind, is reward like no other! .... That's a treat and true compliment.
It's always a pleasure, Styx
I'm so delighted to see you and I absolutely love that you found a little something that spoke to you.
🌹💙
x
Thanks for the visit.... The idea that 'luscious' sprang to mind, is reward like no other! .... That's a treat and true compliment.
It's always a pleasure, Styx
I'm so delighted to see you and I absolutely love that you found a little something that spoke to you.
🌹💙
x
The deeper meanings of submission are eloquently stroked with the burning coals of desire in this magnificent poem. You take penetration to another level with the hardcore fashioning buried so very deep inside. Your mastery of language is amply demonstrated with erotic genius. The emotional balance sways like a beautiful woman sashaying across the room for her master. I love love this poem for capturing the ideals of erotic speech and sinking them into my manhood with the rub of womanly art. You really know how to take me into the heart of wild abandon and keep me there long past the moans of a night.
John
John
My Dearest,
To stoke the fires of imagination and palpable truth of being into emotional resonance is a hope and definitely a goal that I desire to try and keep and hopefully continue to execute with better and improved ability. Your comments leave me body flushed from head to toe in all that glorious emotional transference that any writer would count themselves lucky to receive even half of what you've so generously bestowed upon me. To be bold in expressing one's self is often difficult and scary... You've reminded me that there's a warm, valid and truly consequential appreciation for taking those writing chances, which shrouds me in warmth and wonder.
You're such a beautifully talented writer and positive force, which strengthens and imbues me with all that goodness and potential for future poetic possibilities.
Thank you so much for believing in me, my darling.
My love for you is endless.
I cherish you.
🌹 💙
-Susan
To stoke the fires of imagination and palpable truth of being into emotional resonance is a hope and definitely a goal that I desire to try and keep and hopefully continue to execute with better and improved ability. Your comments leave me body flushed from head to toe in all that glorious emotional transference that any writer would count themselves lucky to receive even half of what you've so generously bestowed upon me. To be bold in expressing one's self is often difficult and scary... You've reminded me that there's a warm, valid and truly consequential appreciation for taking those writing chances, which shrouds me in warmth and wonder.
You're such a beautifully talented writer and positive force, which strengthens and imbues me with all that goodness and potential for future poetic possibilities.
Thank you so much for believing in me, my darling.
My love for you is endless.
I cherish you.
🌹 💙
-Susan
16th Mar 2023 2:17am
You make my palms itch. Do you know that?
The sex here was the power the narrator took for herself. Her step back into her skin.
Submission is about power. You relinquish control, which takes sublime discipline and self awareness, and through the art, you gain control. The allocation of power is the essence of the balance.
This was a siren’s song, and I’m with the leagues of those who have to strap themselves to the fucking ship mast lest they go insane.
You are beautiful.
You are powerful.
You are absolute divine in your exploration of connecting soul to words
💙💐
B
16th Mar 2023 1:18pm
Haha.. I love learning something new.... what a delicious share... I'm all sly smiles! 😏
Your comments are art themselves and become a pocket of sheer warmth within a sometimes cold siren sea....
Navigation of my submissive nature is an ongoing process that I take such pleasure and the right kind of pains in traversing. It's opened my eyes to my aptitude for strength, in how I choose to funnel my emotions and the dedication I have to something that drives to the very heart of what makes me, me. Understanding and accepting oneself is an ongoing struggle sometimes... finding answers to questions that is wasn't quite brave enough to ask when I was younger, is empowering, to say the least.
Your ability to see me and my essence within this piece is deeply moving and beautifully put.
Thank YOU, Betty...
I am beyond grateful for your thoughtful comments.
🌹💙
x
Your comments are art themselves and become a pocket of sheer warmth within a sometimes cold siren sea....
Navigation of my submissive nature is an ongoing process that I take such pleasure and the right kind of pains in traversing. It's opened my eyes to my aptitude for strength, in how I choose to funnel my emotions and the dedication I have to something that drives to the very heart of what makes me, me. Understanding and accepting oneself is an ongoing struggle sometimes... finding answers to questions that is wasn't quite brave enough to ask when I was younger, is empowering, to say the least.
Your ability to see me and my essence within this piece is deeply moving and beautifully put.
Thank YOU, Betty...
I am beyond grateful for your thoughtful comments.
🌹💙
x
your poems always take me on a ride through a surreal journey and end with a crystal clear thought
beautiful.
beautiful.
16th Mar 2023 7:20pm
Wow, Vick... That's high praise... I'm beyond thrilled that you've enjoyed this journey and others as well... It's so amazing to know that you've been traveling alongside... Thank you so much for being here... It's such an honor and a pleasure.
🌹 💙 💙
xo
🌹 💙 💙
xo
16th Mar 2023 7:11am
Wow❣Wow❣Wow❣, Lady Blue. My goal, when writing erotica, is to tap into the deepest. most. spiritual sensations and profound ecstasy of sensual desire and sexual fulfillment. You have captured so well those exhilarating feelings with this verse. Oh to experience the total abandon described in this stanza, "Letting go even tiniest concerns
where self consciousness dictates
embarrassments
I find myself,
allowing each enjoyment heard—" And to witness and participate in this beautiful dance, "speaking with my body
what I cannot always rightly convey
even with the cleverest of words"
Bravissima bella poeta 🐻💞🐰
where self consciousness dictates
embarrassments
I find myself,
allowing each enjoyment heard—" And to witness and participate in this beautiful dance, "speaking with my body
what I cannot always rightly convey
even with the cleverest of words"
Bravissima bella poeta 🐻💞🐰
16th Mar 2023 1:36pm
Dear Bluevelvete,
Your poem "Tiny truths... in glimpses" is a powerful and evocative exploration of desire, intimacy, and the complexities of human relationships. Your use of vivid imagery, sensory details, and poetic language creates a rich and captivating experience that is both sensual and profound.
I am struck by the opening stanza of the poem, which sets the tone for the sensuous and intense journey that follows. Your desire to "shrink down" and "slither deep inside" into your partner's body evokes a sense of passion and intensity that is almost overwhelming. The use of the word "mastery" suggests a sense of surrender and submission that is equally compelling.
Your description of the physical sensations that accompany intimacy, such as the sear burning into each cell and the electrifying current of desire, is vivid and evocative. I love how you explore both the physical and emotional aspects of intimacy, showing how they are intimately intertwined and mutually reinforcing.
Your use of metaphor throughout the poem is particularly powerful, such as the "ying and yang of our power exchange" and the idea of divinity and destiny procreating to create a new life. These metaphors highlight the complex interplay between love and desire and hint at the transformative power of intimacy.
The final stanza of the poem is particularly powerful, with the speaker fully surrendering to their partner and becoming "pure devotion" to them. The use of the word "ownership" suggests a sense of possessiveness and domination that is both erotic and unsettling. The final line, "Yours", highlights the idea of surrender and submission, with the speaker giving themselves fully to their partner.
Overall, "Tiny truths... in glimpses" is a stunningly crafted poem that explores the raw, intense, and complex emotions that arise from intimacy and desire. Your use of language, imagery, and metaphor creates a profound and emotional experience that is both sensual and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Best regards,
Mr Black
Your poem "Tiny truths... in glimpses" is a powerful and evocative exploration of desire, intimacy, and the complexities of human relationships. Your use of vivid imagery, sensory details, and poetic language creates a rich and captivating experience that is both sensual and profound.
I am struck by the opening stanza of the poem, which sets the tone for the sensuous and intense journey that follows. Your desire to "shrink down" and "slither deep inside" into your partner's body evokes a sense of passion and intensity that is almost overwhelming. The use of the word "mastery" suggests a sense of surrender and submission that is equally compelling.
Your description of the physical sensations that accompany intimacy, such as the sear burning into each cell and the electrifying current of desire, is vivid and evocative. I love how you explore both the physical and emotional aspects of intimacy, showing how they are intimately intertwined and mutually reinforcing.
Your use of metaphor throughout the poem is particularly powerful, such as the "ying and yang of our power exchange" and the idea of divinity and destiny procreating to create a new life. These metaphors highlight the complex interplay between love and desire and hint at the transformative power of intimacy.
The final stanza of the poem is particularly powerful, with the speaker fully surrendering to their partner and becoming "pure devotion" to them. The use of the word "ownership" suggests a sense of possessiveness and domination that is both erotic and unsettling. The final line, "Yours", highlights the idea of surrender and submission, with the speaker giving themselves fully to their partner.
Overall, "Tiny truths... in glimpses" is a stunningly crafted poem that explores the raw, intense, and complex emotions that arise from intimacy and desire. Your use of language, imagery, and metaphor creates a profound and emotional experience that is both sensual and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Best regards,
Mr Black
I'll not lie, It's a bit challenging and quite daunting for me to reply with how I envision, to a comment so well thought out and structured. I appreciate the wonderful effort it took and I'm all about taking it all in and properly processing each and every line.
Your high praise is kind and abundantly thorough. I am not the kind of writer who has ever really been taught through official means. Seeing that I only have a two year college degree, I sometimes feel lacking in poetic knowledge and proper structure. I go mostly by intense feeling, the need to purge and creative imagination. Writing for me, has always been something that I have cultivated privately and learned as I went. So the impressive nature of your feedback is a welcomed addition and very much appreciated for it's depth.
My personal proclivities are often difficult to convey in a way that leaves me fully satisfied that what I've been able to convey on the page, in how I imagined it could be in my head... I feel like I'm a bit closer to that notion, after reading your takeaway.
Thank you, sounds like it's not enough but it's honestly heart-felt and very very true.
Best,
🌹B
Your high praise is kind and abundantly thorough. I am not the kind of writer who has ever really been taught through official means. Seeing that I only have a two year college degree, I sometimes feel lacking in poetic knowledge and proper structure. I go mostly by intense feeling, the need to purge and creative imagination. Writing for me, has always been something that I have cultivated privately and learned as I went. So the impressive nature of your feedback is a welcomed addition and very much appreciated for it's depth.
My personal proclivities are often difficult to convey in a way that leaves me fully satisfied that what I've been able to convey on the page, in how I imagined it could be in my head... I feel like I'm a bit closer to that notion, after reading your takeaway.
Thank you, sounds like it's not enough but it's honestly heart-felt and very very true.
Best,
🌹B
18th Mar 2023 2:08pm
Dearest 🌹B,
It is a pleasure to hear from one who so fully appreciates the art of writing, and one who speaks with such eloquence and grace. Know that your struggles are not unique, for even the most seasoned writers face challenges in the quest to express themselves fully and completely.
However, your words reveal a depth of feeling and a creative imagination that is truly worthy of admiration. It is clear to me that you possess a rare talent for creating art in the written form, a gift that should be cherished and nurtured.
And do not underestimate the power of intense feeling, for it is the fuel that drives us all. The need to purge our feelings and emotions is what separates us from the animals, and it is through the act of writing that we are able to give those feelings a voice and a form.
I am humbled by your gratitude, for it is not often that one receives such heartfelt praise. Know that I am always here to offer insight and encouragement, for it is through the sharing of knowledge and experiences that we all grow and evolve.
In closing, know that your talents are a gift to us all, and it is my great honor to be able to share in your journey as a writer. May your pen never run dry, and may your words always flow like the gently rolling tide.
Yours always,
Mr Black
It is a pleasure to hear from one who so fully appreciates the art of writing, and one who speaks with such eloquence and grace. Know that your struggles are not unique, for even the most seasoned writers face challenges in the quest to express themselves fully and completely.
However, your words reveal a depth of feeling and a creative imagination that is truly worthy of admiration. It is clear to me that you possess a rare talent for creating art in the written form, a gift that should be cherished and nurtured.
And do not underestimate the power of intense feeling, for it is the fuel that drives us all. The need to purge our feelings and emotions is what separates us from the animals, and it is through the act of writing that we are able to give those feelings a voice and a form.
I am humbled by your gratitude, for it is not often that one receives such heartfelt praise. Know that I am always here to offer insight and encouragement, for it is through the sharing of knowledge and experiences that we all grow and evolve.
In closing, know that your talents are a gift to us all, and it is my great honor to be able to share in your journey as a writer. May your pen never run dry, and may your words always flow like the gently rolling tide.
Yours always,
Mr Black
16th Mar 2023 2:18pm
How not to let debauched thoughts interfere with Love. Or, how does this blend in with lofty thoughts and hight romance. I'm all kinds of confused.
Let Yin go and fuck Yang. (I said I'm confused....) Kisses, Robert.
Let Yin go and fuck Yang. (I said I'm confused....) Kisses, Robert.
16th Mar 2023 2:24pm
Confused is something that I often am as well, dear Robert!
I think confusion is part of human nature and we're all just working our way towards being comfortable and confident with a day to day understanding, especially when it comes to love, lust and figuring out our places within that particular aspect.
Thank you for your thought provoking feedback, it's very helpful and deeply appreciated
Much love and returned hugs and kisses,
🌹 💙
B
I think confusion is part of human nature and we're all just working our way towards being comfortable and confident with a day to day understanding, especially when it comes to love, lust and figuring out our places within that particular aspect.
Thank you for your thought provoking feedback, it's very helpful and deeply appreciated
Much love and returned hugs and kisses,
🌹 💙
B
16th Mar 2023 2:58pm
16th Mar 2023 3:06pm
16th Mar 2023 7:46pm
his deep
steady
voice
vibrates
through
her defenses
so masterful
his strength
behind words
has her
quivering
to the core
she sees
his eyes
caressing her curves
sending sparkis
flying within
her soul
he whispers
deep in her ears
good girl
you know
what i desire
from you
your not
naked
enough
or truly
vilnerable
enough
i need
both
from you
as he
kisses her
forehead
steady
voice
vibrates
through
her defenses
so masterful
his strength
behind words
has her
quivering
to the core
she sees
his eyes
caressing her curves
sending sparkis
flying within
her soul
he whispers
deep in her ears
good girl
you know
what i desire
from you
your not
naked
enough
or truly
vilnerable
enough
i need
both
from you
as he
kisses her
forehead
Now THAT'S purrrrr worthy.... Whew!!!
I am wonderfully flustered and beautifully lost, basking within that amazing scene you so generously left swimming along in my brain....
WOW!
You win for best comments!! 🏆
I can't convey properly how much I adore seeing you 🦋
Love this poem and you.
🌹 💙 💙 💙
I am wonderfully flustered and beautifully lost, basking within that amazing scene you so generously left swimming along in my brain....
WOW!
You win for best comments!! 🏆
I can't convey properly how much I adore seeing you 🦋
Love this poem and you.
🌹 💙 💙 💙
17th Mar 2023 5:09pm
I love the verbal verity Blue. You are a favorite poet of mine, I enjoy your expression and enchanting eloquence.
LJ
LJ
18th Mar 2023 1:39pm
Hey there, Lj
There's something about being called enchanting that just has me giddy.... Thanks for the Saturday smiles, dear lady. It's appreciated greatly.
I'm stoked that you found something enjoyable here.
Much 💙
xo
There's something about being called enchanting that just has me giddy.... Thanks for the Saturday smiles, dear lady. It's appreciated greatly.
I'm stoked that you found something enjoyable here.
Much 💙
xo
18th Mar 2023 6:21pm
A sensual give and take… sensual words that whisper themselves to me… bravo dearest B…
18th Mar 2023 6:25pm
... and you know how much I adore you listening...
Thank you for those lovely kind words, LilD
🌹💙
xo
Thank you for those lovely kind words, LilD
🌹💙
xo
18th Mar 2023 11:21pm
Wow!... It is brimming with sensuality...
"... ... what I cannot always rightly convey ... even with the cleverest of words ..."
Because it takes a more existential and philosophical form.
"... ... what I cannot always rightly convey ... even with the cleverest of words ..."
Because it takes a more existential and philosophical form.
That's exactly correct.... Sometimes there's just an abundance of thought and emotional space .. and it all can't be fully expressed with words, alone...There's a deep(er) meaning within that need... more than mental and physical even... transcendent...
Thank you for the kind and insightful comments, Marks.
You just get it.
I adore that.
In gratitude -
🌹💙
x
Thank you for the kind and insightful comments, Marks.
You just get it.
I adore that.
In gratitude -
🌹💙
x
Yesterday 10:40pm
"that warm debauched thoughts"
The good thing was that I just finished eating my taco (no pun intended) when I came across this piece (again, no pun intended). You keep raising :-) the poetic bar with these thought provoking tantalizing offerings.
The stanza "Recognizing the amount of tangible lust" I think also expresses a relatable frustration some of us may have with find the right words which you oddly enough expressed so rightfully.
DUP is currently having a glitch about adding RLs but this is definitely one I can come back to reading over and over again... ;-)
The good thing was that I just finished eating my taco (no pun intended) when I came across this piece (again, no pun intended). You keep raising :-) the poetic bar with these thought provoking tantalizing offerings.
The stanza "Recognizing the amount of tangible lust" I think also expresses a relatable frustration some of us may have with find the right words which you oddly enough expressed so rightfully.
DUP is currently having a glitch about adding RLs but this is definitely one I can come back to reading over and over again... ;-)
Yesterday 10:48pm
I want to shrink down
slither deep inside
warm myself
until I'm dripping
of your sweet mastery
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dearest Velvete
i like the mirror polished portraiture of these "opening" lines
and the spiral of awakenings that follow
may the blue skies of spring be with you in all seasons
a warm smile
silent lotus
slither deep inside
warm myself
until I'm dripping
of your sweet mastery
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dearest Velvete
i like the mirror polished portraiture of these "opening" lines
and the spiral of awakenings that follow
may the blue skies of spring be with you in all seasons
a warm smile
silent lotus
