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Death Is Just A Hand
By deaths cold hand were lead to a new land..
Where streets are paved with gold..
And in God's arm's were tightly enfold..
Where streets are paved with gold..
And in God's arm's were tightly enfold..
Published 14th Mar 2023
| Edited 17th Mar 2023
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2023 10:50pm
There's no not picking on my part. It's perfect like it is.
14th Mar 2023 11:19pm
Than you. I don't mean to sound like a ninny. I haven't know anyone here to be rude either. I know some people like to be very accurate when it comes to the Bible. I love that but I really felt this.
17th Mar 2023 6:12pm
Hi, I have decided to change my author note. I decided it was a little defensive. Ha e a good day.
Anonymous
17th Mar 2023 7:17pm
Either way, it's beautiful.
17th Mar 2023 8:37pm
