Subspace

Holy shit that was amazing.
The image of the sensual… flower in your hands, waiting for your mouth is hot as hell. The slow burn of the journey was visceral and deliciously done

Thank you.

Well hell.  You're good at this whole creative writing stuff.  
This is an impressive first write.
Welcome to DUP.  Glad to have your talents here.

Hello Styxian

Pleased to make your acquaintance, i'm happy to hear this poem was impressive for a first write, thank you for the warm welcome and for reading my work.

-A

This is one stunning 'maiden voyage' into our poetic waters ... Needless to say, you've completely captured my attention... This was all that the brevity of sensuality so eloquently should be.

I look forward to reading more.
Welcome to DUP
🌹B

Hello Bluevelvete

Pleased to make your acquaintance as mentioned to the gentleman above, i'm happy it captured your attention and the words came across sensual rather than sloppy, i'm still navigating how to use this website but I think i'm slowly getting there, thank you for following and for reading my work.

-A

After my 1st pass reading, I thought I had an idea what the poem was about. Many of the other commenters have the similar thoughts. However, your key words #dark, #gothic and your title has me second guessing.

It is a sensual piece highlighting the anticipation and hesitation.

After my 1st pass reading, I thought I had an idea what the poem was about. Many of the other commenters have the similar thoughts. However, your key words #dark, #gothic and your title has me second guessing.

But then it clicked, it is a sensual piece highlighting the anticipation and hesitation. The subspace and dark being her submitting via physical or emotional bondage to allow your unimpeded flower exploring.