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Evening's Edge
Evening's Edge
1.
No sooner
than
the fallen
sign,
"All dogmas
slain today,"
had landed
but then
it simply
replaced itself
without reinventing
a single step.
2.
Over
and over,
she fell
over the edge;
what else
was the point
of edging,
really!
1.
No sooner
than
the fallen
sign,
"All dogmas
slain today,"
had landed
but then
it simply
replaced itself
without reinventing
a single step.
2.
Over
and over,
she fell
over the edge;
what else
was the point
of edging,
really!
Published 12th Mar 2023
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Rather than shy from the facts, lead with them. Say what you need.
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2023 6:23pm
Is it teetering that brink or finally cresting over the edge that's more powerful desire .... Hmm... I love when that answer is completely ambiguous...
Love the minimalistic styling and the two segments of formatting, RT.
I appreciate a good evening spent like this, that's for sure... Sometimes the point is to test resolve or to push ones boundaries by either obeying or not obeying...
or so I've heard.... heh heh heh 😏
🌹💙
Love the minimalistic styling and the two segments of formatting, RT.
I appreciate a good evening spent like this, that's for sure... Sometimes the point is to test resolve or to push ones boundaries by either obeying or not obeying...
or so I've heard.... heh heh heh 😏
🌹💙
13th Mar 2023 00:39am
Oh, you've heard that.
I've tasted, smelled, and touched the same.
So, I see what you're saying.
I've tasted, smelled, and touched the same.
So, I see what you're saying.
