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If You Could See Me Now, Naked Schizophrenia
In a voyeur's mist, clinging on
to a midnight glider
riding a wild Rhododendron
in a woodmen's eyes
to a naked Schizophrenia
cloaking the ambrosia
of debauchery's scent
a fragrant sneeze
In my Batman attire
with heart's lusting venom
wearing pale beneath the veil
of the webbing's Hell
with fingers interlaced
to a naked Schizophrenia
croaking sweet harmony
listening to frogs in a teapot
In my Batman attire
to a midnight glider
riding a wild Rhododendron
in a woodmen's eyes
to a naked Schizophrenia
cloaking the ambrosia
of debauchery's scent
a fragrant sneeze
In my Batman attire
with heart's lusting venom
wearing pale beneath the veil
of the webbing's Hell
with fingers interlaced
to a naked Schizophrenia
croaking sweet harmony
listening to frogs in a teapot
In my Batman attire
Published 10th Mar 2023
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10th Mar 2023 8:28pm
Nice 👌 👏 👏 👏 absolutely sounds so illicit and filled with temptation and desire lusting! And forbidden pleasures hidden deep down feigning to quench your thurst and put out your fire 🔥 feeding in to such sinful desires!!! Nice 👌 ink spill please keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
10th Mar 2023 8:46pm
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10th Mar 2023 8:55pm
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10th Mar 2023 9:01pm
About as good a comment I have ever received. I prefer the dark side of writing because of the directions it can take. The dark can wear many hats.
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10th Mar 2023 9:04pm
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10th Mar 2023 9:15pm
Those first three lives of the second stanza talks to us. We like the darkness in it's entirety it makes us think of younger days walking deep down into the swamp. There's darkness in beauty and beauty in darkness, tight
10th Mar 2023 9:19pm
Thank you kindly. The dark takes no prisoners and there is more truth in it.
10th Mar 2023 9:24pm
The naked schizophrenic repeat indicates this isn’t what it seems, but rather, a doppelgänger. Who is the man behind the mask? Why is the Batman attire offered. Is it so we missed the spasmic fingers-laced sensual rage?
Hm.
Or maybe it’s just dark and fun and weird. Maybe there isn’t anything else to see. Maybe the voices in our heads are just a reality to our illusion.
Fun!
10th Mar 2023 9:41pm
Hey now wow Ski! you are a true wordsmith! Holy fuck this packs so many zinggers and one healthy punch to our cerebral pulse! Well done Ski 👍🏻 consider yourself stalked lol your new friend and sister in ink ✍️
Zazzles
Zazzles
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I enjoyed reading. Though some of the poetry escapes me your words still deliver a stellar piece of poetry.
LJ
LJ
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17th Mar 2023 2:24pm
What a wonderful ride down the tea pot funnel this is . Rich in vocabulary and whimsy .. thanks for introducing yourself to me ..
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17th Mar 2023 2:51pm
My dark writing is not all it seems, boiling over from the septic tank. I appreciate you stopping over but watch out for the critters.
17th Mar 2023 5:09pm
