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The Train Ride Home .. Part 1

Why is this ice cream floating Infront of my face? Wait am I dreaming? Ice cream doesn't float, and why do I hear an alarm? Shit it is my alarm!! Wake up!! 😩

I slowly open my eyes and view the blurry numbers on the alarm clock next to my bed. 7:53... Great I really wanted to taste that ice cream, welp. Guess I'll get up and shower so I won't miss the train. 😔

My apartment was small yet comfortable, the perfect batchlor pad for my kid like indulgence. Projection, surround sound, comfy couch... Oh and the kind sized soft bed🤤🤤..  Ok I'm getting ahead of my self let me get moving or I'm going to be late!!

Hot shower.. Check... Freshly shaved head.. check...Something cool to wear for this hot day... Check.. teeth brushed hygiene checked and looks like I'm ready for the day!!!
Oops almost forgot the beard oil.. Need that for the extra shine.

I caught the train just in time, but dam it's hot. I should have worn lighter colors🤦🏿‍♂️. But at least the public limo wasn't packed today.. but where was everyone at. It kinda reminded my of a post zombie apocalypse movie😏.

I sat down, and just as the doors were closing... I heard "Wait!!! Please wait!".
I jumped up and met eyes with one of the most beautiful woman I had ever seen.

Was I sanding there dumbfounded? Damit I was. "Thank you" she said again 🤗

Oh hey " Your welcome" I said with a smile trying not to stare at her facial features.. but damit this was hard. Her skin was so smooth.. Lips full and inviting..But those eyes said it all.. I knew she was a freak.. but let me calm down.. Focus on the moment..

We were having a great conversation and time seemed to stand still. I glanced at my watch and it looks like we had at least 15 minutes until our stop. Luckily she worked not far into the city. She was a painter, an aunt, and a daughter to a military family.

I was intrigued.... She spoke with elegance and dressed so casual. Her shirt looked soft up against her soft skin. Her bra did not hid the fact that I could see a slight outline of her nipples..

Her legs were calling out to me.. Soft and oh shit did she have a anklet on 👀.. Could this day get any better? I had to glance at her sandles, could she pick up a lead pipe? 😂.. Would she scratch up my sheets?

Damit focus... Ok ok. Don't stare to long at her  lower extremities.. But wait she had french tips🥹. Fetish activated!!! My dick twitched... And I knew I had to look her in the eyes again quick.

Engagingly we laughed and continued the train ride ... 7 minutes until our stop.. How hard could I make her nipples... What could I do to let her know I was interested in having her climb on my face like a scared cat..😝

Shit I was almost fully erect.. I totally forgot to shift my sitting position. She got quiet.. Wait did she just bite her bottom lip?👀 I picked up on it waaay to quick. And wait her nipples were pressing up against her layers of clothing like crabs trying to get out of a trash bag!!

She was interested in me? Wait me? Awww shit... How would I play this out. We only had like 5 minutes until our stop.. I leaned back so she could get a better look at my dick. Luckily I freeballed today so I could actuality let things breathe.

Her eyes looked hungrily at me, I knew look when I seen it. This is a feeling I knew all to well.

She asked where I was heading, and could I join her for lunch alittle later. 🤓

"Sure I'm actually hungry now at the moment" I let her know.  "Me too" she said..  "Well any ideas what would appease your appetite?" I asked..

"I know a great spot" she said... We agreed to leave all other of our daily responsibilities behind. And took the train back towards our meeting place.

She took me back to her apartment and asked did I trust her. "Of course"...

She whipped up one of the juiciest burgers I've ever had. And the fries!!! Omg.. She knew how to throw down something in a short amount of time. All while looking so elegant... Sexy..

Fuck my dick jumped again. I knew she knew I was interested.. But I didn't want to come on to strong. How would I go about this? I've just had one of the best burgers by a woman that technically I would lick every inch of her body.

We talked for a bit.. and then... She asked...
"I noticed you looking at my nipples earlier on the train"  "Is that what made you hard?"

Oh shit she was perceptive!!! I couldn't lie.. Fuck it.. We grown !!!

"Yes actually your whole frame had my curious the moment I saw you" I said.

"You want dessert for breakfast?" She asked
As she slipped her warm sole up my leg and rubbed her toe on the tip of my swollen dick. I smiled and said
"I definitely can eat some sweets this morning 🧁🍦"  her couch looked sturdy.. and I hoped her neighbors would understand what was about to happen.

Her skin was soft to the touch, and for some reason she tasted better than she looked. How could this be possible?

Welp time to go to work on her.. Little did she know.. I was a pleaser..  I focused on making her wett as possible.. tracing every inch of her body with my mouth... Sucking the life force out of her body with minimal effort. But for some reason she kept cumming with no end in sight.  She was so.. So wett!!!

I had never experienced this much bodily fluids before.. But I loved every minute of it!!
I slurped and burped for a good hour and knew it was time to hit her with the finishing move..

I told her "relax and when I tell u to hold your breath and push... Do as I say and focus on one spot.. Untill the pressure is gone"

She nodded in bewilderment🙃 but obliged..
I slipped two fingers inside of her warm opening while pinpointing her pulsating spot.
Licking and sucking on her clit with consistent pressure and contact with my mouth.. I multi tasked listening to her body while she tensed up.

Her pelvic region slowly arched to the sky and that's when I knew she was primed and ready.  Finding her g spot I applied pressure and slowly began to vibrate my lips on the left side of her clit.. then feeling for more of a reaction I searched my way though that minefield of electrical impulses that mad her body jerk and shake with a purpose..

I found it!! I found her spot... That magic place that I was going to take her.. I continued to blow and use my fingers to singnal that orgasm to come here.

And to me it came.. In the form of an exorcism!!! She jumped, and screamed like it was the last seconds of her life and she was holding on to what little bit of soul she had left..

I held down her stong yet feminine body with a force she hadn't experienced yet... I would not let her get away from this orgasm.. I wanted her to give me her all.

"Hold your breath and push!!!"

She let out a curdling scream!!!

"ZZZZZZZAAAAAAHHH. AAAHHHHHHHH AAAAAHHHHHH UUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

My beard driped of her nectar... The couch was soaked in her essence.. hell the floor towards the kitchen had traces of her DNA in droplets..

She lay there tears in her eyes.. Legs involuntarily jumping. Toes curling.. All while trying to catch her breath.. Her soul... And gather her thoughts... But I couldn't let that happen.. no sir...

I grabbed her ankle and placed her toes in my mouth.. and slowly sucked each individual one with a purpose.. My mission was not nearly over.. I wanted to show her body what it was missing, as well as overwhelm her senses.

Part 2 coming soon!!


Written by AquariusThoughts (Ajan Hilliard)
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Author's Note
I was inspired by reading a friend's work. I e always been able to come up with concepts easily.. but the hardest part is presenting it so others can understand my thoughts. my brain sometimes is scattered many places at once.. but I figured the subject of sex...lust... sensual situations and exploration.. Is easy because I've loved it since I was very young... Well I hope you enjoy my first venture into publicly sharing my thoughts...
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