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stradivarius
her stradivarius
was his rose
she blossomed into
her stradivarius
blossomed for him
into a rose
was his rose
she blossomed into
her stradivarius
blossomed for him
into a rose
Published 9th Mar 2023
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9th Mar 2023 9:58am
Dear GM,
This is a lovely write. It made me think how love can alter and shape a viewpoint into something that was previously unseen in someone or something else. H🌷
This is a lovely write. It made me think how love can alter and shape a viewpoint into something that was previously unseen in someone or something else. H🌷
9th Mar 2023 1:18pm
Most grateful Honoria for your deeply insightful impression of my poem. You really got to the core of my poem. I am very appreciative for the depth of your view of my words. It means the world to me.
John
John
12th Mar 2023 9:40pm
When a player plays with the Stradivarius, it feels like they are playing right next to me even when the player isn't there. Like playing Ginette Neveu and a rose.
12th Mar 2023 10:11pm
Your comment is so wonderful I was speechless for a moment. Indeed clearly your background gives you deep insight into my poem. My thanks to you is boundless as the universe.
John
John
12th Mar 2023 10:20pm
