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Secret Thoughts
Each day you make me think of your desire
And how you always want me ready. You
Will hold me and direct me to inspire
Devotion. When my lips kiss and renew
The need you feel for me and I for sir,
It's reflected in your grip on my head:
You know that I am where you can concur
And conquer all reluctance. So, I thread
The mouth to an erection that will rise
To the occasion as it feels the heat
And my saliva greeting to entice
You to relax and finally deplete
Reserves of sperm that will surely soon link
Secretions to the secret thoughts, I think.
And how you always want me ready. You
Will hold me and direct me to inspire
Devotion. When my lips kiss and renew
The need you feel for me and I for sir,
It's reflected in your grip on my head:
You know that I am where you can concur
And conquer all reluctance. So, I thread
The mouth to an erection that will rise
To the occasion as it feels the heat
And my saliva greeting to entice
You to relax and finally deplete
Reserves of sperm that will surely soon link
Secretions to the secret thoughts, I think.
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Re. Secret Thoughts
8th Mar 2023 3:07pm
the erotic imagery is compelling but, to me at least, even more so your rhythm and rhyme...a pleasure to savour this erotic morsel...yum....L
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10th Mar 2023 9:42am
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10th Mar 2023 9:43am
Re. Secret Thoughts
8th Mar 2023 4:04pm
Love how you blended your thoughts with pure energy and vibes of lust and happiness that can be felt with each spoken words 🙏😘💪💯
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10th Mar 2023 9:43am
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19th Mar 2023 12:18pm
Re. Secret Thoughts
He's giving you his seed inside of you while you enjoy orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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10th Mar 2023 9:44am
Re. Secret Thoughts
9th Mar 2023 2:30am
You are an absolute beast with the sonnet form. That is fucking spectacular, especially in this genre. You go girl!
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19th Mar 2023 1:17pm
A clean dirty sonnet to outdo Shakespeare himself with a great rounding off
last line! What more could anyone ask for?
last line! What more could anyone ask for?
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Re. Secret Thoughts
1st Sep 2023 4:07am
Aww that sensual desire is a wonderful thing indeed and it can be so much fun and enjoyable to the beginning and middle and end of an experience one will always have sweet dreams about in the still of the night 📿🪷👁️👁️🙏
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