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Surrender~with the talented deliabear

 
Destroyed, She clutched her mangled heart.
unaware the darkness was listening.

Oh humble day, cast not your eyes upon this darkling true.
Who now saunters amidst the shadows.
In the tempest of it all, her pain is lovely.

A starless night vibrates with sinister stirrings,
abysmal echoing, talk of a great love stolen..
beholden to her deepest heart's desire.
Fate proved cruel and took away her love forever.
Drenched in tears she lay, crippled,
in a maze of eternal whys.

Lost to the world she keens she thought unheard
she troubled the restless demons listening.
They were enticed by her agonized wail of sorrow.
A dark lullaby of whispers lulls her to surrender to the darkness.

A shadow descends upon her gaping holes.
Her heart beats, but now lacks
a soul...


Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
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Author's Note
thank you beautiful Deliabear for writing with me ❤️
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