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Penetration
Sit me down and scold me,
you spit when you yell.
You're never one to hold me,
your forehead vein is telling.
The soft jazz yesterday
is ripped from me.
Raped and bleeding
I stagger back,
concede.
I'm the pea, you cannot sleep,
so you stumble into my body
with your fists;
upheld moans you cannot keep.
The floorboards hold their
secrets, the walls never breathe.
The mess is contained,
because I'm seething on my knees.
you spit when you yell.
You're never one to hold me,
your forehead vein is telling.
The soft jazz yesterday
is ripped from me.
Raped and bleeding
I stagger back,
concede.
I'm the pea, you cannot sleep,
so you stumble into my body
with your fists;
upheld moans you cannot keep.
The floorboards hold their
secrets, the walls never breathe.
The mess is contained,
because I'm seething on my knees.
Published 3rd Mar 2023
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- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
3rd Mar 2023 7:26pm
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4th Mar 2023 4:04pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jul 2023 1:45pm
16th Apr 2023 3:05pm
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I too would hope it's fiction, but it anyway presents a raw picture of abuse recalled. Favourite lines:
I'm the pea, you cannot sleep,
so you stumble into my body [ie my presence discomforts you, seems to put you on aggressive]
The floorboards hold their
secrets, the walls never breathe.
The mess is contained,
because I'm seething on my knees. [this verse sums up the closeting influence of abuse that so many victims experience]
I'm the pea, you cannot sleep,
so you stumble into my body [ie my presence discomforts you, seems to put you on aggressive]
The floorboards hold their
secrets, the walls never breathe.
The mess is contained,
because I'm seething on my knees. [this verse sums up the closeting influence of abuse that so many victims experience]
