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Smoke and drink your life away
I never smoke a cigarette
Bad addictions i won't regret
As well as wine too
Things I'd never do
And Fitness is my health asset
Published 3rd Mar 2023
| Edited 4th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Limericks used to be funny, but death is always serious.
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3rd Mar 2023 2:20pm
3rd Mar 2023 2:48pm
Some people play with cigarettes and wine like doing Limericks,
dont they know they are committing sucide???
Health is a gifr we můst take care of.
Thanks Robert, happiness to your soul.
dont they know they are committing sucide???
Health is a gifr we můst take care of.
Thanks Robert, happiness to your soul.
3rd Mar 2023 3:19pm
hello dearest Zin I have always smoked in a way
my parents smoked and me secondhand
I hate the habit but it has always been part of my world...
great write...
my parents smoked and me secondhand
I hate the habit but it has always been part of my world...
great write...
3rd Mar 2023 4:01pm
Confession and honestly are the direct way to put an end to bad habits,
I appreciate your courage, sometimes we are born smokers due to our parents, but this is not a pretext to kill oneself; Its our own body and health aftare all.
Anyway thanks heaps for your constant support my friend, i do haighly value your poetic uplifting and care.
ZinZin, truthfully !!!
I appreciate your courage, sometimes we are born smokers due to our parents, but this is not a pretext to kill oneself; Its our own body and health aftare all.
Anyway thanks heaps for your constant support my friend, i do haighly value your poetic uplifting and care.
ZinZin, truthfully !!!
5th Mar 2023 12:14pm
my cousin recently died from lung cancer. A life long smoker.
She once told me she loved smoking more than her life.
She got her wish.
I don't forgive her ..... and while it's a cruel thing to say, I can't help myself.
Great advice
She once told me she loved smoking more than her life.
She got her wish.
I don't forgive her ..... and while it's a cruel thing to say, I can't help myself.
Great advice
5th Mar 2023 4:39pm
Wonderful ink Zinzin. Smokin is never my thing... I hate the smell and taste. Good health matters :)
