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Sable sinned momentum
I sink into desire
with elegance
Capturing swollen envious swoons
Fragility shall not inhibit
The forthrightness
of
my moon
Wind sown
tattered beauty
Flittering on captured veils
Settling on a version of endeavour
In the havoc of the gale
A dawning of connection
An altered
pensive spirit
A sable sinned momentum
With no ability to steer it
Wherefore my creation
Of finesse
my spirit hones
A chance of brass elation
Settle atop my needy bones
with elegance
Capturing swollen envious swoons
Fragility shall not inhibit
The forthrightness
of
my moon
Wind sown
tattered beauty
Flittering on captured veils
Settling on a version of endeavour
In the havoc of the gale
A dawning of connection
An altered
pensive spirit
A sable sinned momentum
With no ability to steer it
Wherefore my creation
Of finesse
my spirit hones
A chance of brass elation
Settle atop my needy bones
Published 1st Mar 2023
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“The forthrightness of my moon” I love your phrasing and the loose rhyme in this piece. This is tremendous and has masses of depth in the imagery. Wonderfully written. I’ve grazed a few of your other poems. Your rhyme is divine.
4th Mar 2023 12:15pm
Thank you. I perused your work as well. Your poems are rich and lustrous. Lovely work. Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated
30th Mar 2023 3:35am
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