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Old Soul
The winter hazel sunsets,
Softly burn my mind's gazing.
I launch backwards to our first encounter.
Your face,
was the answer to everything
unknown in me.
An old soul.
Awakening a hypnotic ache
In all my heart's breaks.
My scars shimmer with
shiny hot memories of you.
My depth belongs to yours.
Softly burn my mind's gazing.
I launch backwards to our first encounter.
Your face,
was the answer to everything
unknown in me.
An old soul.
Awakening a hypnotic ache
In all my heart's breaks.
My scars shimmer with
shiny hot memories of you.
My depth belongs to yours.
Published 28th Feb 2023
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2nd Mar 2023 11:45am
"My scars shimmer with shiny hot memories of you." Love the alliteration and unexpected imagery.
2nd Mar 2023 11:51am
I've survived alot of darkness, so I'm always imagining my scars. Thx so much for your feedback & for stopping bye...
17th Mar 2023 1:48am
You had too many beautiful pieces to decide on the principles of just one, my poetess, however, this poetic whisper caught my eye to comment in merit.
Enjoy your evening and may you have a promising Friday in all you may seek or plan to do.
Enjoy your evening and may you have a promising Friday in all you may seek or plan to do.
17th Mar 2023 2:12am
Aw. Thank you so very much!
I wish the same to you, have a blessed day tomorrow. Thx for stopping bye.
I wish the same to you, have a blessed day tomorrow. Thx for stopping bye.
17th Mar 2023 2:22am
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