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Wisdom
Deep Underground Poetry
people talking about pointless things
life experiences
and similarities
endless thoughts and disparities
hopelessness is the crime
people talking about living life
maybe they should go outside
leave their home inside their minds
Stop hiding behind your words
It's habit forming
makes it worse
Stop avoiding the life you were served
your eloquence is so perverse
Deep Underground Poetry
Don't try to escape reality
Open your mind,
begin to see.
You are more than you believe.
people talking about pointless things
life experiences
and similarities
endless thoughts and disparities
hopelessness is the crime
people talking about living life
maybe they should go outside
leave their home inside their minds
Stop hiding behind your words
It's habit forming
makes it worse
Stop avoiding the life you were served
your eloquence is so perverse
Deep Underground Poetry
Don't try to escape reality
Open your mind,
begin to see.
You are more than you believe.
Published 24th Feb 2023
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24th Feb 2023 9:28am
As Neo was told in the Martrix... sometimes one needs to plug out...
Brave poem, an ugly truth in it.
Brave poem, an ugly truth in it.
24th Feb 2023 1:24pm
There seems to be a sizable recovery community here, and that crowd tends to rely on other addictions as a way out of whatever addiction that they are currently unhappy with.
I hope, however, that you will not think less of me for noticing the irony in your own eloquence used for the critique of eloquence.
You're right though, sometimes it's best to just shut up and go for a walk.
I hope, however, that you will not think less of me for noticing the irony in your own eloquence used for the critique of eloquence.
You're right though, sometimes it's best to just shut up and go for a walk.
24th Feb 2023 9:24pm
Lol I agree. I try to, if I can, try to inspire people to break those habits with my poetry. People get so lost in their thoughts and feelings, they forget there's a whole world around them.
24th Feb 2023 9:49pm
And their poems will be better and more relatable in the long run if they stay engaged with reality, even when it sucks.
16th Dec 2023 2:36am
Very wise advice and nicely done in poetic form.
There is a vast difference in experiencing versus imaging (book, social media, tv, electronics).
There is a vast difference in experiencing versus imaging (book, social media, tv, electronics).
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