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your eyes...

is it my
mind
that paints
the lust
in your
eyes...?

Written by dejure

(vick)

Published 20th Feb 2023

#emotions #FallingInLove #love #lust #passion

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Re. your eyes...

20th Feb 2023 4:23pm

Superb minimalism....

Felt this one all over, Vick
Excellent poeting
🌹 💙

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20th Feb 2023 5:12pm

Thanks B...

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Re. your eyes...

16th Mar 2023 5:13am

this is amazing..short and sweet!

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16th Mar 2023 8:54am

Thank you :)

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Re. your eyes...

31st Mar 2023 4:58pm

Yes, to beautiful question. Hugs and peace, Oral

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2nd Apr 2023 5:51am

Thank you 😊

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