Joy of Spring

I might have titled this one Iris, there was this song I really liked by that title a long time ago by the Goo Goo Dolls. Listening to it now. The visuals are soft and warm. Wonderful feel of harmony, sensitivity and natural cycles. The most engaging part I think is the smooth transition between energy dispositions, faces daydreaming in the sunlight, the butterfly and the child's finger, it moves along deepening the vibration. Beautiful to experience.

I was attracted by your cool avatar picture, very eye catching. I read the first poem I came to, and what a poem!

I heard a crocus at her altar
opening before the sky,
watched an unfolding of petals
hush into being,

What an opening, the contradictions of sounds and silence. A super peaceful scene is immediately evoked.

you maintain that feeling throughout. Beautiful imagery:  

and bright yellow corella
daydreaming faces
sing to our sun,

And you have captured the nostalgia of the moment, every reader will be transported, including me. Thanking you.

Beauty :)

Simply beautiful.  

The doubling up of "and bright yellow..."  is good because it unifies the subjects.  It makes them inclusive to one another.  Great idea, and brave enough to stick with the repetition to unite the meaning.  Bravo.

Simple and gorgeous capturing of spring