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I Want to Watch you Take a Shit Part 2
Who does that ?
I repeat WHO DOES THAT ??
You'd be surprised
The most personal of personal acts rudely interrupted
A watcher is in the house dear
Oh good
Maybe she'll stay for dinner
That's right
Not your typical male perv
It's a she
She lives for this
Double flush
I repeat WHO DOES THAT ??
You'd be surprised
The most personal of personal acts rudely interrupted
A watcher is in the house dear
Oh good
Maybe she'll stay for dinner
That's right
Not your typical male perv
It's a she
She lives for this
Double flush
Published 9th Feb 2023
Author's Note
Floater
PART ONE IN CASE YOU MISSED IT
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/466820-i-want-to-watch-you-take-a-shit/
PART ONE IN CASE YOU MISSED IT
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/466820-i-want-to-watch-you-take-a-shit/
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9th Feb 2023 8:46pm
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10th Feb 2023 2:09am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Feb 2023 9:04pm
9th Feb 2023 8:59pm
You are a hot fucking mess and probably wouldn't like you any other way
There was NO pun intended "hot fucking mess" just for clarification
There was NO pun intended "hot fucking mess" just for clarification
Anonymous
9th Feb 2023 9:05pm
Whew. Glad i didn't say you needed fixing!
Save😊
Brat ~
Save😊
Brat ~
9th Feb 2023 9:10pm
Actually the line is:
It ain't nothing that a cheap bottle of vodka and a blow job won't cure ...
It ain't nothing that a cheap bottle of vodka and a blow job won't cure ...
10th Feb 2023 00:32am
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12th Feb 2023 1:22am
It's a level of relationship and intimacy that takes years to build.
I wonder how nurses do it though (as far as cleaning up patients).
I wonder how nurses do it though (as far as cleaning up patients).
12th Feb 2023 1:41am
Watching is one thing.
Group participation is another.
Poetic license us funky.
If she's hot get a front row seat Wally
Group participation is another.
Poetic license us funky.
If she's hot get a front row seat Wally
12th Feb 2023 1:51am
Does it count for brownie points, because I used to clean my grandmother up, during her last year of life? 💩😳
12th Feb 2023 2:12am
Definitely !
First thought, any nuts ?
Prefer brownies pure with no nuts but you can't always get what you want...
Nice to see you Lisa 🙂
First thought, any nuts ?
Prefer brownies pure with no nuts but you can't always get what you want...
Nice to see you Lisa 🙂
12th Feb 2023 2:57am
No nuts, but butts--- cigarette butts. It was a sight, me getting another Depends on Gram while she was dragging on a Marlboro ....
Brownies -- now I need chocolate. I'll bake tomorrow after work
Brownies -- now I need chocolate. I'll bake tomorrow after work
12th Feb 2023 3:25am
