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midnight notions
when midnight brushes my mind
I can't help but wonder
her touch
a gentle kiss caressing freedom
cascading a special place in time
a feeling
gazing into her fortress
sterling and noble
well guarded
but not impossible to get inside
there's a patience in my prowess
knowing soon a future will entwine
moments held captive
released with the whispers
blowing in with the rising tide
I can't help but wonder
her touch
a gentle kiss caressing freedom
cascading a special place in time
a feeling
gazing into her fortress
sterling and noble
well guarded
but not impossible to get inside
there's a patience in my prowess
knowing soon a future will entwine
moments held captive
released with the whispers
blowing in with the rising tide
Published 8th Feb 2023
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8th Feb 2023 10:37pm
Gentle stirrings in the quiet of night,
patient anticipations & desires...
It's a beautiful place to get lost in Tim, thank you for bringing us along
patient anticipations & desires...
It's a beautiful place to get lost in Tim, thank you for bringing us along
8th Feb 2023 11:29pm
9th Feb 2023 2:21pm
very intriguing and i was captivated by how you brought night to life
very beautiful
very beautiful
11th Feb 2023 2:39am
20th Feb 2023 11:03am
Your writing is that of an old world poet. I often wonder if romance like this exists anymore. You are a master of love poetry.
