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New Disease
Oh you like my soul
Well hey look I like it too
Cash consent, full access through
Chop me up to bits and then
Boost me up your recommends
Sure it's harrowing
Digitized we broadcast wide
Simulation in your mind,
Feeding you while feeling me
Donate to our new disease
Download endlessly
Cybernetic sympathies
Ripping off identities,
More of me in you than me
Like grand wildfire entropy.
Well hey look I like it too
Cash consent, full access through
Chop me up to bits and then
Boost me up your recommends
Sure it's harrowing
Digitized we broadcast wide
Simulation in your mind,
Feeding you while feeling me
Donate to our new disease
Download endlessly
Cybernetic sympathies
Ripping off identities,
More of me in you than me
Like grand wildfire entropy.
Published 8th Feb 2023
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9th Feb 2023 4:10pm
You nailed this one. Cyber world can be dark indeed. You have to become street smart in its various cities.
You have a very experienced style - you've either read a lot of poetry, written a lot, or both. It's the reading that makes the difference. I with more poets understood that.
You have a very experienced style - you've either read a lot of poetry, written a lot, or both. It's the reading that makes the difference. I with more poets understood that.
9th Feb 2023 7:03pm
You're so kind.
A lot of my influences stem from free-form lyricists and spoken word techniques. I try to make the rhythm of a poem have breath.
Doesn't always work though haha. Thank you for reading.
A lot of my influences stem from free-form lyricists and spoken word techniques. I try to make the rhythm of a poem have breath.
Doesn't always work though haha. Thank you for reading.
