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First Date

Ugh

She was everything
I'd hoped her not to be
Classy
Elegent
Motherly

Wise
Oh
So wise
Carried in those deep
Brown eyes

My God
Or
Oh my goddess
Was I humbled
For the first time

I feared the usual
The worst I have seen
But her will
So keen
Sharp suit
So clean

She held my hand firmly
Not a threat
A greeting
To test my strength

And I hers
But her words
Oh
Her words

She spoke of the world
The wild
New style
Over continents I admire

I've wanted to go
For a while

But more than this
She saw me
Asked
To know me
Completely

I love her smile
Genuine
My God
She is the truth
She is everything

She said no
To go up to my apartment
I was worried

'til She texted
When you're sober
I'll eat that pussy
For now boo
Sleep.

You'll need the rest.
Written by jenny_is_hungry
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Author's Note
I suck at this, man. Haven't drunk for a bit. So of course one drink sends me over the tip. Ugh. Talk about screwing yourself. I dont remember exchanging actual numbers, but she texted, yay!!! Hahaha I'm a mess guys! :(:(:(
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