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late ride home
stayed after work
had dinner with
two friends
driving home from
Cambridge
full moon darting in
and out of wispy
dark clouds
another day
done
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Re. late ride home
7th Feb 2023 6:35am
Dear BK,
Relatable thoughts here in checking off the days. It made me think how some days are more memorable than others.
I hope dinner was good.
I enjoyed this poem. H🌷
Relatable thoughts here in checking off the days. It made me think how some days are more memorable than others.
I hope dinner was good.
I enjoyed this poem. H🌷
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Re: Re. late ride home
7th Feb 2023 11:20am
Thank you, Honoria. This example of "concrete" poetry ( my term) is an interesting experiment in responses.
hugs,
buddhakitty
hugs,
buddhakitty
Re. late ride home
7th Feb 2023 12:43pm
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7th Feb 2023 5:18pm
Re. late ride home
7th Feb 2023 2:30pm
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7th Feb 2023 5:19pm
Re. late ride home
7th Feb 2023 5:00pm
Ah, the weariness, another day rescued from the cutting room floor by this simple but exhausted putting of the day folded nicely away.
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7th Feb 2023 5:20pm
Re. late ride home
8th Feb 2023 1:56pm
I remember having those days and then taking myself the long way home .. which to me was always the best part 🌙
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Re: Re. late ride home
8th Feb 2023 2:35pm
The " after a meal with good friends" ride home. Always a relaxing space to cherish those way too few times.
huggies,
buddhakitty.
huggies,
buddhakitty.
Re. late ride home
12th Feb 2023 00:19am
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12th Feb 2023 2:10am