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Bad decisions at 55
It wasn't up to you
It was up to me
Turns out there was A LOT of falling
Drank too much
Smoked too much
Really over did it on the folly
Still here I am
Full of ego and piss
The cracks are deeper
My bruises lie in wait
Not as quick to calamity
At least that's what I tell myself
Though I can still throw my lot in with the wineos
So go ahead twist that top or pull the cork
Let's get on with it
Oh am I GONNA PAY FOR THIS TOMORROW!
It was up to me
Turns out there was A LOT of falling
Drank too much
Smoked too much
Really over did it on the folly
Still here I am
Full of ego and piss
The cracks are deeper
My bruises lie in wait
Not as quick to calamity
At least that's what I tell myself
Though I can still throw my lot in with the wineos
So go ahead twist that top or pull the cork
Let's get on with it
Oh am I GONNA PAY FOR THIS TOMORROW!
Published 3rd Feb 2023
| Edited 4th Feb 2023
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Don't let the old man in.
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17th Feb 2023 11:06pm
I like the refreshing aspect of this entire musing, my poet... very impressive ink spill to have engaged my mentality...
Enjoy your evening and have a blessed weekend
Enjoy your evening and have a blessed weekend
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26th Feb 2023 3:42am
Yeah, sleep with the choises and then you wake up with the repercussions. I relapsed after 6 years and these are more than words for me. I am now sober and I am in such a fear to lose control again...
26th Feb 2023 12:13pm
Dimitris
You hit it right on the head. A hard worthy battle to stand at the line for. Like me I hope your decisions are made for discipline and not punishment and your forgiveness is swift upon yourself. Thanks for reading.
Bat
You hit it right on the head. A hard worthy battle to stand at the line for. Like me I hope your decisions are made for discipline and not punishment and your forgiveness is swift upon yourself. Thanks for reading.
Bat
26th Feb 2023 12:16pm
Aw self loathing and punishment are my forte... At least I made it thus far without any will to do so, now that I am trying anything's possible ;)
