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Is This Normal? Part 1

its been a long time
but I'm back
my old Miami  
my childhood planet
 
gated neighborhood
not much has changed
 
the persistence of memory
 
mature trees
competing mansions
multi-carat sunshine sparkles
decorating Biscayne Bay
 
I'm going somewhere
isn't that so much of our lives
getting to somewhere else
 
I think I'll drive the canal
instead of US 1
I hate busy streets
 
lazy right turn
decision written
 
this is normal
 
right?
 
driving in a canal
instead of a road...
 
the splash
is thunderous
 
the sinking fast
 
no
 
this is not normal
 
this is not normal
 
at all
 
 
Written by Pinkdreams
Published | Edited 10th Jun 2023
Author's Note
When I woke from this dream, it felt like a metaphor for my whole life.
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