Emergence (excerpt from Moth Halo Collaboration

Your audio poems have excellent pace and emotive enunciation. This was a great contribution to the collaboration, a personal reflection amidst the outer observationals, love some parts in particular like a wild and raging thing, planting tulips in the frozen ground has a sense of determination and hope through difficulties, bloom of red earth and blue sky makes a strong visual contrast for the close. 💖🙏🏻

Thank you, Daniel 💖

Dear L,

I think it took until the third time to actually understand the words I was quite taken by the reading and the music. And that your son composed and performed it…the talent of the progeny doesn’t fall far from the tree is true! Beautiful piece(s) from the both of you. H🌷

Thank you so very much, Honoria 💖

So I was commenting on Daniel's post about how this collaboration was reminiscent of something the Wu-Tang clan would do, each artist with their verse. Listening to the spoken word also gives me a different perspective, as if highlighting your portion of the collaboration accompanied by that mellow music in the background.

It's beautiful and amazing.

Thank you, Wally!

Man, this is powerful. Love these lines:

in the quiet
of the last winter morn,
I gently commune
with the patience of the moon -

Just absolute music *chef kiss*.

Thank you so much!

Amazing! I don't give out many comments, but...This is  a poem at its best.

Thank you so much, Adagio!

I enjoyed your reading.  Your fourth stanza stands out, the whole piece is beautiful.  I love that you and your son can share this.

LJ

It’s one of my most favorite collaborations :).  Thank you so much for reading and listening, it’s so appreciated!

This is beautiful.  I appreciate the gentleness of it.  Your voice fits the write, by the way.  
I listened first, and then I read it.  It is a dual experience that way.  And, twice as rewarding.  
This is a wonderful creation you have done.  And additionally, it's well written.

Bravo to you!

Thank you so very much, Styxian!