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Lover
~~ Written on the 18th of February 2018 ~~
@'~'- ⋆⁺₊⋆ ☀︎ ⋆⁺₊⋆
In this cold and starry night
On my bed I lay alone
In my head I'm asking why
do I miss you to the bones?
Once you said, don't waste your life
waiting for me there...
But that's me, for you I'd dive
into depths unknown, I'd dare!
But the night I said is cold,
as the wind blows some sorrow,
tells me, you're too bold,
he may leave tomorrow...
And the wind is right
Why my burning fire
can't warm up the night...?
@'~'- ⋆⁺₊⋆ ☀︎ ⋆⁺₊⋆
In this cold and starry night
On my bed I lay alone
In my head I'm asking why
do I miss you to the bones?
Once you said, don't waste your life
waiting for me there...
But that's me, for you I'd dive
into depths unknown, I'd dare!
But the night I said is cold,
as the wind blows some sorrow,
tells me, you're too bold,
he may leave tomorrow...
And the wind is right
Why my burning fire
can't warm up the night...?
Published 2nd Feb 2023
Author's Note
Drawing belongs to: ZUM (deviantart)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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2nd Feb 2023 5:50pm
2nd Feb 2023 6:57pm
Boyana,
You capture such beautiful sweet heartache amongst the boldness of admitted desire.... Whether requited or not, the truth, it becomes a bright beacon.... This resonates deeply.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us, dear lady. I adored this piece and applaud the artwork accompaniment, too. It's perfect 👌🏻
🌹💙
B
You capture such beautiful sweet heartache amongst the boldness of admitted desire.... Whether requited or not, the truth, it becomes a bright beacon.... This resonates deeply.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us, dear lady. I adored this piece and applaud the artwork accompaniment, too. It's perfect 👌🏻
🌹💙
B
3rd Feb 2023 2:31am
