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HERO
your words
strung line by line
like pearls
catching what little light
there was
and i sported them
as though they were mine
and how jealous
i was of those
you would gift
just as you had gifted me
so that i was
just another
strung line by line
like pearls
catching what little light
there was
and i sported them
as though they were mine
and how jealous
i was of those
you would gift
just as you had gifted me
so that i was
just another
Author's Note
Inspired by LunasChild8's Alive in Memory comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. HERO
2nd Feb 2023 2:29pm
Thank you for submitting your poem to my competition, javalini. I enjoyed reading this.
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2nd Feb 2023 3:09pm
Re. HERO
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2023 3:37pm
You always capture emotion in such a heartfelt beautifully amazing way.... it's fresh, impactful and searing.... It's no surprise, as I've said before that your poetic voice is a total favorite, but I've missed seeing you and reading your poems.... so I thought I'd remind you of just how much I do enjoy them.... and you
Thank you and good luck in the comp.
Warmest regards,
🌹
Thank you and good luck in the comp.
Warmest regards,
🌹
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Re: Re. HERO
2nd Feb 2023 5:50pm
Thank you so much, Blue.
You're always encouraging.
I've been missing your poetry lately, too.
I'll look for it.
Thank you again.
J.
You're always encouraging.
I've been missing your poetry lately, too.
I'll look for it.
Thank you again.
J.
Re. HERO
3rd Feb 2023 6:44am
Dear J,
Perfect. Just perfect. Reminded me of a teacher I had long ago. Generous and giving. I’ve tried to emulate that. Not as successfully but I’ll keep trying until I get right. 😉
I wish you all the best in this comp. Lovely piece. H🌷
Perfect. Just perfect. Reminded me of a teacher I had long ago. Generous and giving. I’ve tried to emulate that. Not as successfully but I’ll keep trying until I get right. 😉
I wish you all the best in this comp. Lovely piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. HERO
4th Feb 2023 9:11pm
Thank you, Honoria. Your comments always brighten my days.
I was thinking of the literary heroes of my youth -- how deeply they touched me -- how personal it felt -- and how odd it seemed they touched so many others. It was as though they belonged to just me.
Thank you again for your comments.
Truly appreciated.
J.
I was thinking of the literary heroes of my youth -- how deeply they touched me -- how personal it felt -- and how odd it seemed they touched so many others. It was as though they belonged to just me.
Thank you again for your comments.
Truly appreciated.
J.
Re. HERO
4th Feb 2023 7:46pm
Echoing all of the above. You are a gift to so many, especially me. Your verse is consistently of a high order. I think of that marvelous Beatles’ line: “Changing my life with a wave of her hand….” You do that.
Ty, my much younger brother. Rock on!
Ty, my much younger brother. Rock on!
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Re: Re. HERO
4th Feb 2023 9:17pm
Thanks so much, my friend. I've been perusing and enjoying your poetry as well. Thank you for your kind comments.
J.
J.
Re. HERO
13th Mar 2023 10:27pm