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Your touch as soft as a sledgehammer to the brain
you said i was so wicked
that it made you proud to sin
I wear tattoos in saliva ink
of your secrets on my chest
and your sounds are on my skin
Published 25th Jan 2023
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25th Jan 2023 2:01am
"Tattoos in saliva ink" - very clever!
Reading your short poems reminds me of how a lover may leave little notes, here and there, to let their partner know they're special. Pretty cool thought, and it's because your writes lead readers towards such images.
Good stuff.
Reading your short poems reminds me of how a lover may leave little notes, here and there, to let their partner know they're special. Pretty cool thought, and it's because your writes lead readers towards such images.
Good stuff.
25th Jan 2023 2:22am
Wow. You know what? That's what it feels like I am doing but didn't know I was doing it?
So many I admire and admittedly lust after maybe it's my subconscious telling them so
You are pretty damn awesome. Thank you!
So many I admire and admittedly lust after maybe it's my subconscious telling them so
You are pretty damn awesome. Thank you!
25th Jan 2023 3:13am
26th Jan 2023 2:10am
25th Jan 2023 11:11am
Your erotic words upon the page
Have my hormones in a rage
Desirous of your moistened pink
To add my own saliva ink
"I wear tatoos of saliva ink".... What a great line!!! (enhanced by such an erotic picture)
Have my hormones in a rage
Desirous of your moistened pink
To add my own saliva ink
"I wear tatoos of saliva ink".... What a great line!!! (enhanced by such an erotic picture)
26th Jan 2023 2:11am
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