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Rising Waters
The waterline is rising
and all we do is stand there.
Stand in the same stagnant quagmire
that covers the same worn
(worn out)
path... waiting to drown.
A thick mist rises,
a fetid cloud covering our eyes
Blinding us, making us stumble
(repeating mistakes).
Moist, wispy tendrils wrap around us;
a comforting feeling
(complacency).
Day in, day out, breathing damp
putrid air needing
A good stiff breeze to break away;
A fresh new hard blow,
not an old stale blow hard.
and all we do is stand there.
Stand in the same stagnant quagmire
that covers the same worn
(worn out)
path... waiting to drown.
A thick mist rises,
a fetid cloud covering our eyes
Blinding us, making us stumble
(repeating mistakes).
Moist, wispy tendrils wrap around us;
a comforting feeling
(complacency).
Day in, day out, breathing damp
putrid air needing
A good stiff breeze to break away;
A fresh new hard blow,
not an old stale blow hard.
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