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Shock Treatment
Do you honestly think
That he will ever change?
Change his clothes maybe
Or his partners
Or try to change you
Mold you into the
Perfect sheep
Willing to follow
As he takes you down the
Winding road of
Losing your sanity over him
Only to be shocked
Back into reality
As the door closes behind him
And you lock the door
That he will ever change?
Change his clothes maybe
Or his partners
Or try to change you
Mold you into the
Perfect sheep
Willing to follow
As he takes you down the
Winding road of
Losing your sanity over him
Only to be shocked
Back into reality
As the door closes behind him
And you lock the door
Published 23rd Jan 2023
Author's Note
Just workin it out…
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Anonymous
24th Jan 2023 1:06am
Sometimes I wish those doors were barricaded Great write friend
24th Jan 2023 3:34am
Dear H,
This makes me think of whatever doesn’t kill you makes you stronger. Of course I wish it wouldn’t take me so many times to get stronger 🙄.
Your courage strengthens us all.
H🌷
This makes me think of whatever doesn’t kill you makes you stronger. Of course I wish it wouldn’t take me so many times to get stronger 🙄.
Your courage strengthens us all.
H🌷
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Mar 2023 7:45pm
24th Jan 2023 3:45am
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Perfect title!
The way you started this piece- it's all so relatable.
We've all been at different stages of a bad relationship.
Loved this!!
The way you started this piece- it's all so relatable.
We've all been at different stages of a bad relationship.
Loved this!!
27th Jan 2023 4:00pm
The title definitely grabbed me.
I thought this was going to be something different.
Relationships can definitely be challenging.
Especially when someone refuses to change.
And constantly wants you to...
Into this perfect servant and mind reader.
(But only the parts that can control you.)
Sometimes we need to be shocked back to reality.
But somehow we cling to the shock.
So the cycle just continues...
I thought this was going to be something different.
Relationships can definitely be challenging.
Especially when someone refuses to change.
And constantly wants you to...
Into this perfect servant and mind reader.
(But only the parts that can control you.)
Sometimes we need to be shocked back to reality.
But somehow we cling to the shock.
So the cycle just continues...
29th Jan 2023 10:57am
You go, girl. I still remember the insightful and compassionate comments you made re my poem “They Will Ask.”
Real growth, imho.
Real growth, imho.
