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Somewhat cold

The body of my formerly huge brother
Was right there in that small urn
On that fancy table in front of us.

A small chapel at the cemetary
Can't say I had strong feelings
As I never could really relate
To my older brother

Afterwards the family
And a few of his friends
Gathered at some restaurant.

I never even spoke to the new widow.
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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..........for a comp. Based on reality.
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