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IN SWEET HARMONY
Let us together be
here in sweet harmony,
between us no pretence
in naked innocence,
as the steam around us
warms, softens ambience;
where no one need to be
feeling coldly lonely,
where the things that unite
transcend division, spite,
In participating
would be liberating!
If you could sing with me
this song of unity,
with no need to dress up
then this might win the cup!
POSTSCRIPT COMMENT
It gets under the skin
they're clearly happy in!
here in sweet harmony,
between us no pretence
in naked innocence,
as the steam around us
warms, softens ambience;
where no one need to be
feeling coldly lonely,
where the things that unite
transcend division, spite,
In participating
would be liberating!
If you could sing with me
this song of unity,
with no need to dress up
then this might win the cup!
POSTSCRIPT COMMENT
It gets under the skin
they're clearly happy in!
Published 21st Jan 2023
| Edited 22nd Jan 2023
Author's Note
More about love than sex. Inspired by song "Sweet Harmony" by The Beloved (1993) and its video of singer Jon Marsh singing naked among a bevy of modestly posing equally nude women. Video link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rP9Z5Pc8cRM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rP9Z5Pc8cRM
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21st Jan 2023 10:19am
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22nd Jan 2023 1:39am
You have been writing short prose a of late, but they convey the sweetest erotic message, my wise poet.
Of that video, I could take part in such an ensemble now (wasn't so happy in my own skin when it was made 1993). Deserves a remake with a more multiracial cast to which I would invite you if I was the video's maker.
