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2022
Dear Summer,
how quickly you ran ahead of me
long legs so beautifully kissed by the sun racing through fields of flowers
warm grass in all shades of emerald
cool rocky rivers
beckoning bare feet to wade
glowing in the hot sun
her dress drenched
in summers perfume
door ajar
autumn came almost overnight
blowing cold breezes
through the eves
whistling around corners
encouraging the need
for soft warm comfort
fire is sparked
in a glowing chimney
black charred with age
burnt oak perfume
fills the senses
winter closes in
skies are a seamless
stretch of gray
where sunlight hides
her golden rays
in far away places
time seems to stand still
when we become so eager
for springs unfolding bliss
she places bulbs
in jars longing
for what is still
lying in wait
outside her door
how quickly you ran ahead of me
long legs so beautifully kissed by the sun racing through fields of flowers
warm grass in all shades of emerald
cool rocky rivers
beckoning bare feet to wade
glowing in the hot sun
her dress drenched
in summers perfume
door ajar
autumn came almost overnight
blowing cold breezes
through the eves
whistling around corners
encouraging the need
for soft warm comfort
fire is sparked
in a glowing chimney
black charred with age
burnt oak perfume
fills the senses
winter closes in
skies are a seamless
stretch of gray
where sunlight hides
her golden rays
in far away places
time seems to stand still
when we become so eager
for springs unfolding bliss
she places bulbs
in jars longing
for what is still
lying in wait
outside her door
Published 20th Jan 2023
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20th Jan 2023 8:50pm
21st Jan 2023 1:55pm
Thank you so much Tim for your beautiful comments and for the taking for your RL .. humbled and honored
Peace 🦋
JeJe
Peace 🦋
JeJe
20th Jan 2023 8:55pm
Sensitive and well paced, I love the slow unfolding of the seasons and the descriptive rendering, beautiful work.
21st Jan 2023 1:53pm
Thank you so much Daniel for your beautiful comments and for taking for your RL .. humbled and honored
Peace🦋
JeJe
Peace🦋
JeJe
20th Jan 2023 11:52pm
Dear J,
Beautiful in imagery and thought. I enjoyed this journey of seasons and how we tend to respond in “getting through” some and relishing in others. Delightful write. H🌷
Beautiful in imagery and thought. I enjoyed this journey of seasons and how we tend to respond in “getting through” some and relishing in others. Delightful write. H🌷
21st Jan 2023 1:51pm
Dear H
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments and for the taking for your RL .. we do have a tendency to want to rush through some parts.. each of which are extraordinary and beautiful in their own ways. I couldn't live where each season isn't honored and delighted in.
Peace🦋
JeJe
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments and for the taking for your RL .. we do have a tendency to want to rush through some parts.. each of which are extraordinary and beautiful in their own ways. I couldn't live where each season isn't honored and delighted in.
Peace🦋
JeJe
23rd Jan 2023 7:12pm
You show emotion and passion. You have a gift of communicating with nature. I felt every word.
24th Jan 2023 00:36am
Thank you so much adagio for your thoughtful comments, very much appreciated
JeJe🦋
JeJe🦋
