Self Portrait

You are creating a really neat portfolio of poetry. Deftly delivered and cleverly executed. I can see strains of Larkin - and that is 1 of the greatest compliments I can feebly offer.

Gratefully received.

“Man hands on misery to man. It deepens like a coastal shelf. Get out as early as you can, and don’t have any kids yourself.”

Interesting take on self. I can envision this piece to be all encompassing— fill in the blanks. I took out “men” and put “mother”. It’s relatable and real. Good luck in the comp.

Hello. I love that you put your own interpretation in this. It’s the mark of a reader totally immersing themselves in what dwells before their eyes. Thank you.

No one usually likes the truth, do they?

One must look to the self to answer that. Thank you.