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a smile among the roses
Everyday I tell myself I need to get over you, But every night I find
myself thinking about how much I want you back.—Hussein Nishah
everyday
i wait for you
by my window
but all i see are roses
blushing red
in the dripping of my tears
in my lay-
wait rendezvous
i crave to know
the things your heart discloses
when my bed
kills my sleep with nameless fears
how i pray
the morning dew
will one day grow
a smile among the roses
so my spread
soul may drink your love arrears!
© Copyright 2023 January 09
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
myself thinking about how much I want you back.—Hussein Nishah
everyday
i wait for you
by my window
but all i see are roses
blushing red
in the dripping of my tears
in my lay-
wait rendezvous
i crave to know
the things your heart discloses
when my bed
kills my sleep with nameless fears
how i pray
the morning dew
will one day grow
a smile among the roses
so my spread
soul may drink your love arrears!
© Copyright 2023 January 09
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 9th Jan 2023
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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9th Jan 2023 9:27pm
11th Jan 2023 5:09am
Thank you, DC!
I'm glad to see you around here at this new-year startup. I look forward to seeing your work grow and impact your readership here. May your troubles all be small ones and your fortunes ten times ten, by the Grace of God.
Sincerely
cab
I'm glad to see you around here at this new-year startup. I look forward to seeing your work grow and impact your readership here. May your troubles all be small ones and your fortunes ten times ten, by the Grace of God.
Sincerely
cab
11th Jan 2023 3:43pm
12th Jan 2023 10:49pm
THIS --
" Everyday I tell myself I need to get over you, But every night I find
myself thinking about how much I want you back.—Hussein Nishah "
in Your opening spill,
caught me off guard but forced me to confront many demons in my past.
Is this not what WE Poets try to bring forth?
Loved every line and hint.
" Everyday I tell myself I need to get over you, But every night I find
myself thinking about how much I want you back.—Hussein Nishah "
in Your opening spill,
caught me off guard but forced me to confront many demons in my past.
Is this not what WE Poets try to bring forth?
Loved every line and hint.
Hey, Tallen, my Brother!
Great to see you emerge at just the right time -- for NaPo23 is at the doorstep, and I hope you will participate.
Thanks for landing where my poem was in waiting, and for your remarks and commendations. As long as life continues, feelings cycle through our experiences, and the poet remains the muse.
Sincerely
cab
Great to see you emerge at just the right time -- for NaPo23 is at the doorstep, and I hope you will participate.
Thanks for landing where my poem was in waiting, and for your remarks and commendations. As long as life continues, feelings cycle through our experiences, and the poet remains the muse.
Sincerely
cab
