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inside looking out
he pulled the shades
down tight
shut the door
and locked it up
made sure no one
was looking
but i saw it all
everything
all the dark
all the pain
all the hurt
all what was,
trying to hide
what's inside
down tight
shut the door
and locked it up
made sure no one
was looking
but i saw it all
everything
all the dark
all the pain
all the hurt
all what was,
trying to hide
what's inside
Published 8th Jan 2023
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8th Jan 2023 4:41pm
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2023 4:44pm
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9th Jan 2023 00:53am
8th Jan 2023 5:17pm
Reads almost like a Bukowski, but embraces a sense of fractured humanity in a vulnerable, open way.
9th Jan 2023 00:54am
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9th Jan 2023 00:55am
8th Jan 2023 5:40pm
Loved this! We try to close off the world and the world of hurt is inside of us.
9th Jan 2023 00:56am
Anonymous
8th Jan 2023 5:50pm
You really accessed something profoundly deep and impactful, H.
Really excellent poeting
Thank you.
Hope you are doing well in the new year
🌹 💙
B
Really excellent poeting
Thank you.
Hope you are doing well in the new year
🌹 💙
B
9th Jan 2023 00:57am
