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Point Breaks
A pallid twilight
cut
like a knife,
through the night.
Thorn
in
my side,
cold over cold sweat: Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide.
Falling into a calling.
Pen fragmented
in
fractures,
a pristinity, written in beams, beaming - breaking streams, broken in tokens
of
break.
cut
like a knife,
through the night.
Thorn
in
my side,
cold over cold sweat: Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide.
Falling into a calling.
Pen fragmented
in
fractures,
a pristinity, written in beams, beaming - breaking streams, broken in tokens
of
break.
Published 3rd Jan 2023
Author's Note
Woking on a concept volume of poetry...
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3rd Jan 2023 8:28pm
3rd Jan 2023 9:40pm
Thank you My Great Friend...
The premise for this project,
as far as I can see, at this time is:
1. How each generational genetic pool produces the poets...
2. The nature of the time periods, into which they are born...
3. The point of recognition, by the poet, of the nature of this time period, into which they were born...
I heard this YouTube documentary on "the downward spiral" by NIN...
I really really like the premise and want to explore that
pathway, through a poetic lens...
The madness and genius...
The premise for this project,
as far as I can see, at this time is:
1. How each generational genetic pool produces the poets...
2. The nature of the time periods, into which they are born...
3. The point of recognition, by the poet, of the nature of this time period, into which they were born...
I heard this YouTube documentary on "the downward spiral" by NIN...
I really really like the premise and want to explore that
pathway, through a poetic lens...
The madness and genius...
4th Jan 2023 2:23am
Hey Cipher
Falling into a calling.
I can relate to that.
I read your reply and it got me wondering how many undiscovered poets
were out there. People who wrote and didn't share with anyone.
The next generation comes along and falls into the calling. (poetry)
Never knowing that their ancestors wrote.
Good luck with this!
Falling into a calling.
I can relate to that.
I read your reply and it got me wondering how many undiscovered poets
were out there. People who wrote and didn't share with anyone.
The next generation comes along and falls into the calling. (poetry)
Never knowing that their ancestors wrote.
Good luck with this!
4th Jan 2023 2:38am
Thank you A...
I know you recall me talking about
the downward spiral...
I appreciate greatly...
I only mentioned...
So you wouldn't worry about me...
Also...
I like sharing things with my friends...
:)))
I know you recall me talking about
the downward spiral...
I appreciate greatly...
I only mentioned...
So you wouldn't worry about me...
Also...
I like sharing things with my friends...
:)))
