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Beside myself
not sure I like
her taste in mirror
or the depth
of wound last time
she held it up
her taste in mirror
or the depth
of wound last time
she held it up
Written by
lepperochan
(Craic-Dealer)
Published 3rd Jan 2023
| Edited 4th Apr 2023
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Re. Beside myself
3rd Jan 2023 1:40pm
Interesting to contemplate Eamonn. Ironically I wounded myself with scissors whilst looking into the mirror yesterday 😩 and they told me not to run with them. 🤟😝
Always good to see something from you fellow. 🍻 Hey I messaged you off site about a comp idea when you've got time.
Always good to see something from you fellow. 🍻 Hey I messaged you off site about a comp idea when you've got time.
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Re: Re. Beside myself
3rd Jan 2023 11:50pm
Daniel, how're you doin
I got it a bit wrong at first, changed it around a bit so it's more aligned to my originol thinking
thanks much for your presence and thoughts
I got it a bit wrong at first, changed it around a bit so it's more aligned to my originol thinking
thanks much for your presence and thoughts
Re: Re. Beside myself
Right on brother I'll give it another look. I've got some new work I've been sitting on I feel like it needs a little edit here and there. Plus it's hard to find a quiet time to record an audio.
When I think of mirror, I think of the reflection of ourselves in others, I also think of the times partying when, for whatever reason, the party drugs seem to go around on a mirror, really amped up times together and then the aftermath. Being 46 now, I look back on all the fun times, difficult times, friends that are gone and how much who I was then is bound up in who they were to me.
When I think of mirror, I think of the reflection of ourselves in others, I also think of the times partying when, for whatever reason, the party drugs seem to go around on a mirror, really amped up times together and then the aftermath. Being 46 now, I look back on all the fun times, difficult times, friends that are gone and how much who I was then is bound up in who they were to me.
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Re. Beside myself
3rd Jan 2023 6:21pm
Whoever thought to invent a mirror, never thought of the consequences.
It catches one unawares an awful lot.
A deep gritty ditty Lep. :)
It catches one unawares an awful lot.
A deep gritty ditty Lep. :)
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Re: Re. Beside myself
3rd Jan 2023 11:53pm
Hullo
Ahh come on now the mirror loves you, the camera loves you and the screen loves you more
but yeah, they have their moments
*Hat tip*
Ahh come on now the mirror loves you, the camera loves you and the screen loves you more
but yeah, they have their moments
*Hat tip*
Re. Beside myself
3rd Jan 2023 10:18pm
I agree with the above comments, it packs a powerful punch. Always good to see your writing!
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Re: Re. Beside myself
3rd Jan 2023 11:55pm
Hullo there
I also agre with the above comments, but refuse to believe there is a single mirror in the world ...nay, the universe that would be unkind to you
thank you for your words, lady
I also agre with the above comments, but refuse to believe there is a single mirror in the world ...nay, the universe that would be unkind to you
thank you for your words, lady
Re. Beside myself
4th Jan 2023 1:08am
hello Eamonn I think the mirror be the soul and whoever is reflecting back at you because as you know that varies person to person... intriguing write 💕
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Re: Re. Beside myself
4th Jan 2023 9:06am
Brenda, gud morning
I think you're right, there's no telling what the fkrs will give away at a glance.
thank you for your words
*Hat tip*
I think you're right, there's no telling what the fkrs will give away at a glance.
thank you for your words
*Hat tip*
Re. Beside myself
6th Jan 2023 00:40am
Re: Re. Beside myself
11th Jan 2023 5:42pm
Hullo
sorry I missed you.
thanks for your presence and thought print
*Hat tip*
sorry I missed you.
thanks for your presence and thought print
*Hat tip*
Re. Beside myself
4th Apr 2023 3:35am
I really like the subtlety and brevity of this one. It’s witty and ironic and self-deprecating in that inimical style of yours. I’d have preferred it without the italics, but I’m fussy haha.
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Re: Re. Beside myself
4th Apr 2023 9:23pm
For you, good fellow I have murdered the italics.
fine praise indeed, and much appreciated. sometimes it comes together
*hat tip*
fine praise indeed, and much appreciated. sometimes it comes together
*hat tip*
Re: Re. Beside myself
7th Apr 2023 10:36am