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a very minor night in a life less than perfect
January
first
laying in bed
smoking
watching the
cloud rise and
float away like
the spirit from
my body
dog barking outside
the window
we are both
alone tonight
no voices
no demands
no expectations
the dog in his
yard
yelping
me in my room
writing
both of us
creating
our own
poetry
the peace is as
inmeasurable
as a promise
from
God
Published 2nd Jan 2023
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2nd Jan 2023 2:18am
Scoot over, sounds like a good break from things to me.
But I'd give the dog some peanut butter, keep it busy awhile. Lol. Too much barking messes up the thought processes.
I can appreciate this write of yours, for its simple way of saying it ain't such a bad thing, to chill.
But I'd give the dog some peanut butter, keep it busy awhile. Lol. Too much barking messes up the thought processes.
I can appreciate this write of yours, for its simple way of saying it ain't such a bad thing, to chill.
2nd Jan 2023 2:45am
2nd Jan 2023 2:42am
hello beautiful Kitty I too am grateful the fog lifted from the skies today
and I could touch the blue again my inner fog lifted as well...
this is gorgeous to me 💕
and I could touch the blue again my inner fog lifted as well...
this is gorgeous to me 💕
2nd Jan 2023 2:46am
2nd Jan 2023 3:59am
Dear BK,
You are off and running with such insight in this poem. The closing stanza is amazing. It’s as though you show us how to direct our energy such that we can find the positives. I really appreciate that!
Happy New Year!! Xx
H🌷
You are off and running with such insight in this poem. The closing stanza is amazing. It’s as though you show us how to direct our energy such that we can find the positives. I really appreciate that!
Happy New Year!! Xx
H🌷
2nd Jan 2023 5:54am
2nd Jan 2023 6:59pm
"both of us
creating
our own
poetry" we all relax and express ourselves in different but similar ways.
Happy New Year bk.
creating
our own
poetry" we all relax and express ourselves in different but similar ways.
Happy New Year bk.
2nd Jan 2023 9:01pm
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