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Trip to Hawaii or the Cautionary Tale of Writing Someone Else's Tune.. (sung to the tune of 'At Seventeen')
Stepping on broken shells
Caught up in some enchanted spell
Walking along a sandy beach
With the ocean just outside our reach
We climbed a mountain just to look at the stars
Drove on roads not meant for cars
Playing tag amongst the banyon trees
And lay out with the ocean breeze
You and I, hand in hand
Listening to some hawaiian band
Watching as the big whales breach
Or scuba diving underneath
For two weeks we're in paradise
Never thought the world could be this nice
It's gotta be a dream
That's how it seemed
Caught up in some enchanted spell
Walking along a sandy beach
With the ocean just outside our reach
We climbed a mountain just to look at the stars
Drove on roads not meant for cars
Playing tag amongst the banyon trees
And lay out with the ocean breeze
You and I, hand in hand
Listening to some hawaiian band
Watching as the big whales breach
Or scuba diving underneath
For two weeks we're in paradise
Never thought the world could be this nice
It's gotta be a dream
That's how it seemed
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