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Quickie Behind the Liquor Store
Put the heat on in your car
Park behind the liquor store
Couple of vodka pulls
Your lips burn
Booze and desire
Back seat babe
You should be cooking dinner for family
Instead here with me
Sin parade
Raw and captured
The way it is
Wrong side of town
Right for me
Park behind the liquor store
Couple of vodka pulls
Your lips burn
Booze and desire
Back seat babe
You should be cooking dinner for family
Instead here with me
Sin parade
Raw and captured
The way it is
Wrong side of town
Right for me
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Re. Quickie Behind the Liquor Store
31st Dec 2022 00:57am
You gave her orgasmic bliss over and over again while your seed created multiple kids. Keep on writing.
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31st Dec 2022 1:00am
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31st Dec 2022 00:58am
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31st Dec 2022 1:01am
Re. Quickie Behind the Liquor Store
31st Dec 2022 1:00am
And may I add quite possibly the most inelegant author's notes ever.
That's a compliment.
That's a compliment.
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Re: Re. Quickie Behind the Liquor Store
31st Dec 2022 1:03am
Re. Quickie Behind the Liquor Store
Anonymous
31st Dec 2022 1:18am
Line in a piece I am working on
Probably same side of town
"Take me to some 'neon flashing' TruckStop Motel so I can show you what I like best"
(Paid off the driver)
Probably same side of town
"Take me to some 'neon flashing' TruckStop Motel so I can show you what I like best"
(Paid off the driver)
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31st Dec 2022 1:21am
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Re. Quickie Behind the Liquor Store
31st Dec 2022 8:48am
Last line inspired a couplet:
Wrong side of town, right for me
to take such sinful liberty.
Wrong side of town, right for me
to take such sinful liberty.
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31st Dec 2022 11:04am
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31st Dec 2022 4:18pm
"Wrong side of town" gives new meaning to the saying "Playing away" (in this case away from one's own neighbourhood).
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2022 11:42am
Every town seems to have a wrong side. Some towns are just the wrong side. Enjoyed this. Happy New Year PS.
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31st Dec 2022 12:02pm
My town growing up had a wrong side. One of those classic towns with a Main Street. I was always fascinated with the apartments above the stores. It got really quiet at night. I'm sure a lot of sex and sin took place in those apartments. Probably some great writing too.
Appreciate the read and comment Rob
Happy New Year to you too !
Hope the world finds some sense to it's existence. We poets need to lead the way ...
Appreciate the read and comment Rob
Happy New Year to you too !
Hope the world finds some sense to it's existence. We poets need to lead the way ...
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1st Jan 2023 1:15am
And booze to go
Package deal from the package store
Can’t be beat
Thx Wally
Happy New Year !!
Package deal from the package store
Can’t be beat
Thx Wally
Happy New Year !!