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let the singe of my love burn you through and through
we've hurt each other
over and over again
it's our normal
outsiders looking in
shaking their head
disapproval
nobody asked you
stay on the sidelines
placid is for others
your world is beige
the pain invigorates
acute suffering
longing
despair
molten lava desire
we use each other
set up for a fall
singed
sanctified
thrilling
over and over again
it's our normal
outsiders looking in
shaking their head
disapproval
nobody asked you
stay on the sidelines
placid is for others
your world is beige
the pain invigorates
acute suffering
longing
despair
molten lava desire
we use each other
set up for a fall
singed
sanctified
thrilling
Author's Note
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Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
Anonymous
18th Dec 2022 5:13pm
Oh how I love this
I understand bringing a little color even though it may result in dark storm
Reminded me of some of my favorite lyrics
Either way, I lose you in these silent days
It wasn't right
But it was right on time
"BL!!!'
I understand bringing a little color even though it may result in dark storm
Reminded me of some of my favorite lyrics
Either way, I lose you in these silent days
It wasn't right
But it was right on time
"BL!!!'
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 5:23pm
I really like those lyrics !
Dark writing is a thrill, the Swamp needs it
I need it
Thx LF
Dark writing is a thrill, the Swamp needs it
I need it
Thx LF
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 5:49pm
Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 6:05pm
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 6:43pm
Oh do I ever understand this. Some of us like the dark scary colors and thunderstorms now and then. Awesome, powerful write.
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 8:02pm
Every top has a bottom or variations within ...
I write them for those who want to but can't....
Appreciate you PINK
THX
I write them for those who want to but can't....
Appreciate you PINK
THX
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 7:57pm
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18th Dec 2022 8:03pm
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 8:06pm
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18th Dec 2022 8:11pm
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
Anonymous
18th Dec 2022 10:38pm
They do say the dark reveals deeper truths. They also say sex is a great cure for insomnia.....it's been a sleep-less year over here. Enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
18th Dec 2022 10:45pm
Here too
Sleep is elusive
Sex is welcomed
In lieu of all that there's poem writing, whiskey and a new dog ..
Thx Rob
Sleep is elusive
Sex is welcomed
In lieu of all that there's poem writing, whiskey and a new dog ..
Thx Rob
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 00:25am
Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 00:52am
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 00:34am
Nothing vanilla about this…
Vanilla, beige, it’s all the same. People always disapprove of what they don’t understand. Give me red hot and burning coupled with a little darkness any time.
Longing and despair keep us alive. Setting up for a fall always has a possibility of being caught in the end.
HUGE F’ING LIKE
Vanilla, beige, it’s all the same. People always disapprove of what they don’t understand. Give me red hot and burning coupled with a little darkness any time.
Longing and despair keep us alive. Setting up for a fall always has a possibility of being caught in the end.
HUGE F’ING LIKE
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 00:54am
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 00:47am
Need darkness to show light. Your photo does that well also. You leaped, speaking to on-lookers. “nobody asked you”
Creative turn!
Creative turn!
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 00:57am
Yes, a lot of people want to dictate with their own morality. If I have any issues, they will be worked out accordingly with my own …
Thx NG
Always good to see you here with your wisdom.
Thx NG
Always good to see you here with your wisdom.
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 2:13am
(I love that picture!)
And I love this type of poetic writing from you. It comes from a part of thought that I can easily stand beside and see it clearly, because you wrote it well, for me to follow along. I envy how some writers can accomplish concisely what it takes me forever to eek out. Such as this one of yours. Bravo.
And I love this type of poetic writing from you. It comes from a part of thought that I can easily stand beside and see it clearly, because you wrote it well, for me to follow along. I envy how some writers can accomplish concisely what it takes me forever to eek out. Such as this one of yours. Bravo.
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 2:22am
Thanks on the pictute, thought this one needed something different.
This write had a step on the gas feel that just poured out.
As usual as you know I keep things lean.
Slice and dice as I like to say.
Much appreciate the comment and RL
Stay tuned
Thx
This write had a step on the gas feel that just poured out.
As usual as you know I keep things lean.
Slice and dice as I like to say.
Much appreciate the comment and RL
Stay tuned
Thx
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 3:06am
Yes, love and fire...
I honestly don't seek to be burned. But I accept that it will happen, since I like to walk as close to the line as I do. Hmm, maybe that's the same thing? Anything but beige.
All I know is, intensity rules, and this has it. 🔥🔥
big burning like
❤k
I honestly don't seek to be burned. But I accept that it will happen, since I like to walk as close to the line as I do. Hmm, maybe that's the same thing? Anything but beige.
All I know is, intensity rules, and this has it. 🔥🔥
big burning like
❤k
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 3:19am
You're getting closer to the edge RED
Burned myself on a pizza stone a few nights ago and tried to get into it.
Yeah I'm weird ...
Thx
🤬❤💥
Burned myself on a pizza stone a few nights ago and tried to get into it.
Yeah I'm weird ...
Thx
🤬❤💥
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 10:09am
Such a vulnerable and passionate write.
Wonderful pic as well.
Great ink, friend 😁
Wonderful pic as well.
Great ink, friend 😁
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Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 10:13am
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 1:27pm
emotionally chilling whoa, brother I must say that this is one just one of your best. Inspirational and makes the fellow man think. Riveting and sensational!
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 1:44pm
Wow, that is an amazing comment PoH !!
There's a lot in there to consider and I'm glad you felt the emotion in it.
Really appreciate your words
Thank you
There's a lot in there to consider and I'm glad you felt the emotion in it.
Really appreciate your words
Thank you
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 5:02pm
"the pain invigorates" it also inspires, it's like fuel to a fire and we're able to create great things through it.
Well said Poet.
Well said Poet.
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
19th Dec 2022 6:23pm
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
20th Dec 2022 3:03am
Hi PS:)
This was quite the journey for such a short read.
I hate when I get the disapproving look from people
who don't get your private life. I agree - stay in your lane or
you'll get run over!
Loved your closing!
This was quite the journey for such a short read.
I hate when I get the disapproving look from people
who don't get your private life. I agree - stay in your lane or
you'll get run over!
Loved your closing!
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Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
20th Dec 2022 3:27am
Good Evening Hot Sauce 🔥,
Yes, life is quite a journey in my lane.
This urban cowboy has seen some stuff.
Some we retain and some is jettison country but YES, if you don't like what I'm doing keep it to yourself....
That's something I would say, stay in your own lane yo ..
Thx for dropping by and the RL add
Grab a hot sausage at the weiner booth ..
Stay tuned, new art coming ...
Yes, life is quite a journey in my lane.
This urban cowboy has seen some stuff.
Some we retain and some is jettison country but YES, if you don't like what I'm doing keep it to yourself....
That's something I would say, stay in your own lane yo ..
Thx for dropping by and the RL add
Grab a hot sausage at the weiner booth ..
Stay tuned, new art coming ...
Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
20th Dec 2022 11:19am
Re: Re. let the singe of my love burn you through and through
20th Dec 2022 11:37am
I was hoping you would weigh in on this one
You get it
Stay tuned for more hot while you cruise the cold
Thx L
You get it
Stay tuned for more hot while you cruise the cold
Thx L