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Below the surface

Where once there was harshness,
compassion now flows.

Where once I sensed sharpness,
a golden heart shows.

But the critical spiritó
I wonder who knows?
Written by Wafflenose (Ellie)
Published
Author's Note
Sometimes it's good to watch and wait. A couple of people have revealed themselves to be far more than I previously thought they were. However, in the case of the last one... same old, same old!!
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